Like.. Prostitution selling?

Gotta give ppl more than just "I'll change my mind". It sets up for a "what if he defaults or skimps out on me"

Shit, if I could find the time, I'd fight a furry character.

I would like your babies.

You can't use the same terminology as a fart to mecid!

Put it this way- MECID IS FUCKING AWESOME TOO!

Please tell me what you think, while I go off and work on backgrounds.

OMG! I haven't gotten fanart in SO LONG! Thank you SO MUCH!

My only critiques right now are:
She needs to have more definition in her hips and legs. At this point, her upper body is HUGE and her lower body would so like... not carry it. Her arms should totally like.. be longer too and should have some foreshortening in there!

Here's an example of foreshortening


I would not worry about depicting motion if it is simply a pin up. That would totally like.. come later! You should like work on your clothing folds as well! Clothing should not like.. totally cling to the body! OH, and you should work a bit on your side views as well! At this point the human looks like some kind of alien with no bridge of her nose or lips protruding.

Also, the walnuts or acorns you drew seem to be a bit dark.
Or were those lemons? Lemons- yes. I scrolled up.

I personally do not use quills or brushes. I use a regular ball point or micron.

ANYWAYSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I think your art is SO improving at a dramatic rate! OMG, don't you see? You should totally just keep drawing!

Like Angie totally said, you should like... all be drawing!
I'm gonna go draw you some fanart RIGHT NOW

Bitter.


Are you even serious about improving? You're wasting our time if you aren't. We took our time out to give you OUR opinions and you're taking them, and smooshing doggie doodoo on em! Just go FOLLOW it already.


You should be DRAWING. and not posting repetitive retorts!

To add onto what Kuro said,

Regardless if backgrounds are distracting, if you are to make it in ANY industry of comics- you're going to have backgrounds. It doesn't need to be super detailed, but it needs to give the reader a sense of surroundings.

You do not see professional comic artists go "the background was too distracting to the words being said"

A perfect example from one of my favorite comics.
The words being told are important, but so is the background. It is giving the reader the IMPACT to go along with the foreground and the dialogue.


You can have those gradient background moments for close-ups/emotion shots. I'll even use myself as another example since I just LOVE using gradient and texture backgrounds. In the example below, I give simplistic and soft backgrounds to -again- give the reader knowledge where the fuck my characters are! As in, they're not floating in space somewhere. I used gradient backgrounds for close ups, etc. I am by far not a professional, but I couldn't think of any other examples for minimal backgrounds.


In regards to finding your comic entertaining, I found it anything but since I KNOW it was a shot at your failed attempts with the approval committee. So yes, definitely "bitter". (Feel free to illustrate that opinion next). My state of mind was more in the sense of "He just wants to show an example of his artwork", and that is what I looked at.

It is a place you go to watch guys whack off.

So.. you're saying I'll no longer have to download porn?

Come play with us, Zsa.

Forever, and ever and ever

I wish I didn't read that. Nothing like thinking of babies smashing into cement.  =(

Who's Fooooo?

LOL! What is this now?

Gotta try this.

Ouch, Might as well stick to April 31st because of the SDT then. Don't want false advertising.

Don't judge me, Kev!!