drawdan, although this doesn\'t seem finished, i can still kinda tell where you were going with this.
I think your visual story telling is pretty powerful even without any dialogue. Especially how you draw the expressions on those creatures. I like how you slapped the details on Drea. Good display of wood texture.

Gakidou, i really like the colouring you got going on combined with the simple but indept environments, but it would make your work shine more if you toned some of the things a bit darker or lighter to gain accent and creat more depht.
When Drea stomps Goblin\'s foot, good jesus i felt that for a second. lol That last page proves you know some of the unwritten rules of humor and that is \'surprise\'.
Finally, i really enjoyed that first page with aall the books: the way you titled the fight on the side of the books. Kept me staring for a while.
Just try to work a bit on dynamics here and there.

Gak i liked the characters (some of the poses we alittle off but it wasnt a major thing) but the backgrounds threw off your stuff, like the horizon line was in the wrong place making the way the characters were standing and stuff look odd. Other thna that good fight

Sucks you couldnt finish drawdan D:

It\'s a library that also sells guns and narcotics and sometimes small girls if they have them in stock.

Wtf Void City has a library?

Drawdan-could have been a little longer but I really liked your linework

Gakidou-beautiful colors and the ending was awesome

YES YES YES. i loved it   8D

drawdan, wish i coulda seen more....but from what i saw, i really liked. your quality is always awesome.

gakidou, OMG. the comic was beautiful! every panel was eye candy. the story.....a little bland, but the art was enough to keep your score up  (it\'s been a while since i\'ve given someone an A for quality)

great job, and i can\'t wait to see more!   <3

Aww, thanks anyway! I\'m looking forward to seeing whatever you\'ve got done.

sorry to all that I could not finish my entry, I am not defaulting, but could only find time to pencil my intro. I started a new job shortly after the challenge began and I am trying to get used to a new scheduale. I dont plan to issue or accept any new challenges untill I have fully adjustd to my new job. Good luck Gakidou-im sure your enty will be awesome.

THERE I hope i\'ve done this right. D:
Stop expecting good things from me I don\'t know what i\'m doing you guys.

Also spending 3 weeks quite thorougly CGing like 5 pages didn\'t really do wonders for working on my time management skills.. But uh... I\'ll focus on drawing real quick and scribbly next time.
Honest.

SON OF A BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH!!!!!! GET IT DREA!!!

Gaki, dont dissappoint or Drea will be kindling...somehow, dont asknhow...^^;

DREA!!!  fuck yes!!!   kick some ass.

this is gunna be great from both sides, i can just feel it. *wiggles with excitement*  83

Time to pop the cherry! I\'m calling wood.

Hey! Thanks for the challenge! I\'m so excited, my first battle. :x

Thx for accepting,..looking foward to seeing your first slugout!

Go get him miss woody!