Speed Resurrection Tournament 2018, Round 1 / Frequency6: BUZZCUT vs. Dyna and the Gal

Speed Resurrection Tournament 2018, Round 1 — Frequency6: BUZZCUT vs. Dyna and the Gal

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ArtsandGoodies
Artist

566 comments

# 6 Posted: Jul 16 2018, 08:00 PM

Mints, I really enjoyed this comic, overall It was really fun and enjoyable. I personally was mostly fine with the context, all that was really needed imo was a throwaway line from the cops as to why they're chasing the girls and I think it would have been fine. The lines from the dieing cop could have been that or you could have had the cops on page 4 say somethign before getting killed. also this was more enjoyable on my second read through noticing all the details better like the cops all getting killed by the momentum of the girl being pulled along was really funny. also the light color is pretty cool and maybe next time you can do something more extreme with it for points of focus.

neens
Approval Committee

266 comments

# 5 Posted: Jul 16 2018, 06:41 PM

mints this is also a lot going on in 6 pages and it's great! I'll agree with the other comment about wanting more context for what's going on though. I can take pretty good guesses for most things, though I do wonder what buzzcut needed tammy for. it was funny though, good bgs and tones and I'm looking forward to more!

The Bent One
Artist

564 comments

# 4 Posted: Jul 10 2018, 05:58 PM

Minteh: The story here seems a bit vague, other than both characters are running from the Hell Police, and then Buzzcut is swallowed/killed by some sort of ooze. Are they supposed to be trying to get to the river Styx? The actual panels showing her fate get smaller and smaller, which makes it feel like it's almost not important. Other than that, the action and pacing are easy to follow, and I wasn't confused as to what was happening between the characters.

Minteh
Global Moderator

275 comments

# 3 Posted: Jul 9 2018, 08:00 PM

Got my pages all up! Hope you're able to get in and submit stuff RTV/Mister Satisfied!

Red
Council

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# 1 Posted: Jul 3 2018, 04:44 PM

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I can't manage my characters because i...have none? weird
I am logged in with the proper data, but the site doesnt recognize me.
God knows how much i love to arse the council about these miniature apocalypses. I'll save it for two minutes before deadline, the rest of time i shall spend learning how to draw.