Orion: This was a fun little comic, and I'm seriously impressed you managed to do 3 pages in one day, good lord. The perspective on the panel where Dairyu is on the stairs seems a bit off, especially the proportions between Dairyu and the gate. I was left a little confused about the reaction in that last panel, but honestly it made me laugh regardless, so like. Good job either way lol!
Snowymoth: I love the coloring on this comic! The blue tones look real nice~ and I love the inks you've got! I think your comic could've benefited from a few more full-body or establishing shots, since the vast majority are close-ups which don't feel like they give enough of a sense of space? Still, amazing job at getting this much done in just 24 hours, seriously!!
24hr Match: Summer Cruisin' and Bruisin'! / David Birch vs. Dairyu
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
Aug 10 2019, 11:02 PM
# 6
Posted:
Aug 10 2019, 09:36 PM
orion: ey, good gags! i highly appreciate that the abstract concepts of holiness and unholiness having signposted residence in void.
snowy: short, but cute! gotta wonder what dairyu sees in the sewer man
snowy: short, but cute! gotta wonder what dairyu sees in the sewer man
# 5
Posted:
Aug 10 2019, 09:17 PM
Orion: I really like the first page that's really impressive for a 24 hour comic, also this little story is nice interaction.
Snowymoth: A sort cute story and i love the blues you used in this.
Snowymoth: A sort cute story and i love the blues you used in this.
# 4
Posted:
Aug 10 2019, 06:34 PM
Orion: Wow, talk about "the wrong side of the tracks!"Considering it's 24 hours... it's a bit sparse and it cuts off, but it's clear and clean and prioritizes the right elements to be understood.
Snowymouth: Now that is nice! Clean, finished, stylishly limited, a little story of a night at a festival all in one page. A very good choice for 24 hours.
Snowymouth: Now that is nice! Clean, finished, stylishly limited, a little story of a night at a festival all in one page. A very good choice for 24 hours.
# 3
Posted:
Aug 7 2019, 02:29 PM
Two very short and sweet comics! Nice job for 24Hrs!
Orions dialogue was nice and full of character, very good!
I also liked the quality Snow had with theirs, very fancy panels and stuff!
Orions dialogue was nice and full of character, very good!
I also liked the quality Snow had with theirs, very fancy panels and stuff!
# 2
Posted:
Aug 6 2019, 06:45 AM
congrats guys on getting two coherent, clean looking comics finished in 24 hours :O That's seriously impressive.
Orion- A super ambitious comic. I'm guessing this was some sort of post-battle drinking session? I liked the location and the effort you put into the backgrounds.
Crit wise your lines were messy and overlapped a fair bit. I know this was a tight deadline, but maybe this is something to keep in mind.
Snowymoth- WHOLESOME. It was a simple story, but I feel like you successfully used your time. I really like the additional of blue in the colouring. Good job!
Orion- A super ambitious comic. I'm guessing this was some sort of post-battle drinking session? I liked the location and the effort you put into the backgrounds.
Crit wise your lines were messy and overlapped a fair bit. I know this was a tight deadline, but maybe this is something to keep in mind.
Snowymoth- WHOLESOME. It was a simple story, but I feel like you successfully used your time. I really like the additional of blue in the colouring. Good job!
# 1
Posted:
Aug 5 2019, 06:50 PM
Both of you are Insane for doing a 24 Hr battle, but mad props for being able to draw and do so much in so little time, take a bow both of you, you two are awesome and these were fun comics to read :-)
Sparring Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Aug 10th, 2019
Votes Cast:
13
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1419
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Orion - I really like your interpretation of the theme, especially the ending where she thought they were going to battle soon. Thank you for the battle!
Edit: This wasn't supposed to be a date at all, just two people hanging out. ^^;;