As always, the amount of content you are able to produce is nothing short of incredible man. I envy the focus you must have in order to finish such a large entry in such a short amount of time. Additionally, you also take the time to add backgrounds to all of the important shots, always making perfectly clear what the surrounding environment is. You show great passion for your work and I respect you a ton for that.
As for the weak points, I agree with the others when they mentioned the writing could use some work. However, I don't think the plot you write itself is a problem. I believe anything can work as long as proper dialogue is in place to smoothly take the reader through it.
I have a theory as to why some of the character lines can feel a bit wonky and bloated at times. What I image happens, is that you write down a general script of all the information you would like to provide the reader with as they go. However, you then just simply paste that as the dialogue itself. You don't work on properly translating that message into words that the character would actually say. Which is why the dialogue can come off as bloated with some characters stating the obvious, or being just plain out of character. I would personally recommend taking some extra time to study your opponent speech quirks and patterns, as well as reviewing them with their creator. Maybe even run some hypothetical scenarios with them to get a clearer idea of how they approach different situations.
Once you nail that aspect though, there's not a doubt in my mind that you will become one of the strongest comic artists on site.
Iv'e actually read a good bunch of your comics and am in love with your slick and clean style. As other mentioned, it's a shame you were unable to finish as you had the basis for an excellent round. Of the 3, your scars were definitely my favorite ones, as they carry some real weight behind them. I don't really have much of a crit since it felt you really knew what you were doing, but ran out of time.
There is just one thing I'd like to make note of, but it's not much of a critique, more so a personal opinion. When I first read the entry I was a bit confused because I didn't fully comprehending that CHOP CHOP was going full body snatcher on us. Not because it wasn't conceivable, but because his first round made me think he was rather harmless, which at the time confused me as well as his ref made him sound rather ominous form the get go. Granted, each round is meant to stand on it's own, and linear story development between rounds isn't a mandatory. That's pretty much how I handle my own rounds in other tournaments; just self contained stories. But the bottom line is, the tonal shift in character did catch me a bit off guard. Again, I don't see it as something bad. More so just something I felt like pointing out and maybe keep in mind.
Either way, love your work can't wait to see more of it in the future!
MY MAN. I was really looking froward to your second round as I've become increasingly invested in Maw's development. Additionally, I'm super honored that you had Taboo stick around a little more as he tries to identify what he previously dealt with. Which I thought was a rather clever and quick way of giving the audience more information about Maw's nature, without having it instead be explained by him or some unknown party. However, I can't help but feel a bit guilty when saying that the inclusion of various characters might've also been your greatest weakness this round. As much as I adore Kit and Jade, they should've probably been kept a little more in the background, same with the mysterious stranger. I'm under the impression that he was added in to sorta tie everything together at the last minute. But since he's someone who literally just shows up with no clear motivation, it feels a bit odd, especially when given the honor of actually being the one who scars CHOP CHOP. Maybe if he had been introduced in the first round, I could see him having active role on the second round working a little bit better.
That aside, your comic art, while a little incomplete this time, was still perfectly readable and the action is as good as ever.
I can't wait to see more of the hungry boi!
All in all, great round! Keep up the amazing work!
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Nothin - It's a shame you weren't able to finish this! So much potential! Love the scar you gave them. A lot of sketchy pages but still readable somehow. I am impressed.
Brabbit - Always loved your characters, style and the fluidity/motion of your comics and this doesn't disappoint! But this felt like more of a Kit and Jade comic than a Roxy/Maw/Chop Chop battle. I did have to look at previous comments to see what their names are cos I dont think they were ever mentioned even in this comic (I apologize if I missed it) so that also added to my confusion. Either way it's a good story on its own just did not seem focused on the characters that are supposed to be the highlight for this battle
Cab - Congratulations and thank you for the Raven cameo. I love her in your style! I really have no crits but I gotta commend you for the improvement you had on this one. The backgrounds are not cluttered anymore in the latter pages (IDK if that is a time constraint thing on your part but it WORKED to your benefit). And I love that you integrated the past opponents Looma and Taboo in this story. Brilliant.
I can't help but think that Chop Chop is now Groot for the meat-eaters XD and I can't wait to find out what happens next with Maw!
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I do have ONE CRIT: How dare you get Baby Shark stuck in my head now.