Diggin your story telling. You have a great sense of mixing humor with drama. Also his flower print doc martins. <3

I've been tinkering with these pages in photoshop for the past few days. Cleaning them up adding proper color and generally fixing some of the issues brought up in the comments and I'm pretty happy with how they've turned out.

The finished ones will look like this



I really took to heart some of the comments and the finished works are really something I feel proud of!
There's just a few touch ups to do on the final page but once those are done I'll post them up proprely tonight!

Awesome!

I was worried about the formatting, but I seem to have pulled it off.

I do plan on using them both but I'm not exactly sure how to label the character creation thing as it only lets you have 20 letters. Should I type up a profile for both or just for one? Is how they met required in the bio or can I just explain it in the intro comic?

Thanks for responding so quickly as well. I'm having fun with this and I'm working on the intro comic now!