thanks for the input guys.

@pyras: i´m looking for some feedback with panel layout mostly... maybe perspective tips once these go into the next stage of drawing. tbh i dont know where to begin since this is all very new to me.
the comics i made back in the day have had a completely different focus.

@ ishtar dragon: i´m not sure wheather i can fullfill this at this point for this guy.
i´m planning on doing this the silent way with minimal conversation. more body language and visual story telling. character building is not really my strength so i decided i will let him begin hollow/mysterious and pep his personality up over time.
to make it less zombielike i´ll try my best to display other characters alot hopefully displaying their personality better that my own guy given there is way more content xD

Whoever joins this, welcome and have fun!!! I joined that way myself. Its a fun experience.

Looking forward to you all new combatants.

i remember you :3 and you seem to have improved murderhorse alot which is really good.

hopefully you´ll find time to finish your intros and battle some. i really like the concept.

also yeah get rid of that last panel border. it works nicely without.

Since i participated in the lsdt ( yay me, believe it or not this is a big thing for me) i feel like i should limber up and keep things rolling.
So i was always fascinated with voids achievement system which led me to the goal to achieve them as good as i can.
My first step was entering a character i feel i can draw for without the selfinflicted requierement to deliver highperformance quality. This is why i opened luka a incubator topic.
Next step would be to create other characters for the creator award and actually fill those 25 comics requiered minimum. Chances are ill never reach that one but i really think that progress will result in much needed confidence in my art skills. At least i cant say i cant do comics anymore then.
Ill post my character ideas in here. And once i flesh out possible intro material for them i hope i can get assistance in the incubator.

Do you have any thoughts on this?

Dude this is one hell of a progress. You are doing good. I dont know what the approval commitee says but at this rate youll have your character in in no time

I just want to mention that i would prefer a random selection each round. This way One can plan ahead wich takes away some of the lightspeed spirit.
Just my bit.

Also i would like to have eric in. I wouldnt mind having him pushed in via double default handling.

I second every mention before.

My advise. Dont fiddle too much with his visuals at this point. You are clearly skilled with your tools. Its pretty much unimportant wich hairstyle or look you display him at first. This is a sort of developement that will take place over the battles you hopefully will show us in the future.

Concentrate on the character itself. Dive into him and go below the superficiality.
A good technique to get to know your character better are little question lists like these. http://tekkysfurries.tumblr.com/post/137069221442/get-to-know-me-uncomfortably-well
This is not the best sadly.
As mentioned before try out in comic form or just sketches how he would interact with other characters (of your choice though void ocs would be easy). Its like getting to know a stranger. But this stranger is your stranger with a cane.

The moment you feel your character as someone who could be actually real (as much as some stuff can be real *cough) you have it way easier to draw for him and to do comics.

this would be awesome

cant believe i post this crap anyways.



Rango, one of Santas little helper elves. That is formerly working for Santa.
He was dismissed for violating other fellow elves and pissing into the cookie dough.
He had a troubled childhood. hes in this Tournament to proove Santa his worth with BLOOD.

i am strangely proud to have produced something with colour. strange feeling xD
no i still dont comic sadly...

it was really late so i hadn´t the energy left to finish without destroying it. still its fine.
cool stuff shen also i like the occult theme bangarang

on it...