thanks, guys. it'd be interesting to know what's so 'calming' about this comic vs. my other stuff.
could it be that Manda is a character who doesn't emote very hard? the character herself is not a very reactive one? i definitely had planned to make someone who has subtler emotions and finally got around to it.
could it be the pacing ? how having panels all the same size forces you to add more panels, which slows down the action?
:|c i've got a lot to think about.
how to bail on a burly gap / Manda Naranja
Critiques & Comments
# 11
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Oct 11 2021, 08:24 PM
# 10
Posted:
Oct 10 2021, 11:25 PM
Honestly I felt odd reading this a bit cause it was Snager all the way through and it was also calm. Like I'm not sure how to explain it but holy damn, that was something to read.
# 9
Posted:
Oct 10 2021, 10:07 AM
This was weirdly calming to read. The lack of dialogue made me pay attention to the pictures more, and I like how you spaced out the more polished panels. The whole thing felt like a dream and made me super relaxed. Now play me some saxophone as I drift off to sleep at 1pm.
# 8
Posted:
Oct 10 2021, 08:24 AM
*Squints* Is that an 'All dogs go to heaven' reference?
Also Final panel on page six is fantastic
Quote from: Fluffsamasprime
thanks, i tried to make SOME panels look good.
and: I combined a lot of pop culture heaven crap to try to capture the vibe.
# 7
Posted:
Oct 8 2021, 09:06 PM
*Squints* Is that an 'All dogs go to heaven' reference?
Also Final panel on page six is fantastic
Also Final panel on page six is fantastic
# 6
Posted:
Oct 8 2021, 07:53 PM
I thought a Burly Gap was a clothing store for tough husky sailors.
Quote from: Footini
yes, AND you can buy skate apparel there, with Manda Naranja as spokesperson
# 5
Posted:
Oct 8 2021, 01:01 PM
Translation: How to not accidentally castrate yourself while skateboardingQuote from: Kilcra
just one of the many benefits and draws of the sport discipline to those who already don't have balls
Quote from: snager
I thought a Burly Gap was a clothing store for tough husky sailors.
# 4
Posted:
Oct 8 2021, 12:41 PM
Translation: How to not accidentally castrate yourself while skateboarding
Quote from: Kilcra
just one of the many benefits and draws of the sport discipline to those who already don't have balls
# 3
Posted:
Oct 8 2021, 12:09 PM
I understood about 45% of the words in the title which only intrigues me moreQuote from: Footini
translation:
"How to safely dismount while in progress of a risky aerial skate trick involving two horizontal planes of wheel contact and land in a way to minimize damage"
Quote from: snager
Translation: How to not accidentally castrate yourself while skateboarding
# 2
Posted:
Oct 8 2021, 11:47 AM
I understood about 45% of the words in the title which only intrigues me more
Quote from: Footini
translation:
"How to safely dismount while in progress of a risky aerial skate trick involving two horizontal planes of wheel contact and land in a way to minimize damage"
# 1
Posted:
Oct 1 2021, 08:56 AM
I understood about 45% of the words in the title which only intrigues me more
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Beyond Battle
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Oct 15th, 2021
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The angel design is awesome, too. The whole comic makes me think of this song:
https://open.spotify.com/track/4naD0iZnsQOD0gqlONmo5z?si=1npjfXByT2KlC6pV38JvLg