Intro Story / Nathaniel Bähr
Critiques & Comments
# 6
Posted:
Nov 8 2021, 02:18 PM
Gorgeous stuff as always, I quite like the dynamic between these two characters. I think you hit your background quota, although I thiik there could have been a few more to better flesh out the space.
# 5
Posted:
Oct 11 2021, 04:54 PM
YESSS, the boys are finally in town!!!
Like always, I absolutely adore ur palettes and color choices used to highlight scenes and the characters in it- especially with more dramatic close up shots!! Your dreamy colors being the star of the show is always a given, but I'm more excited on you being able to finally flaunt how well you're able to write interactions/dialogue for more colorful and expressive characters! I'll quit gushing for now, but I'm so excited on seeing future comics with these idiots fhdjf
Like always, I absolutely adore ur palettes and color choices used to highlight scenes and the characters in it- especially with more dramatic close up shots!! Your dreamy colors being the star of the show is always a given, but I'm more excited on you being able to finally flaunt how well you're able to write interactions/dialogue for more colorful and expressive characters! I'll quit gushing for now, but I'm so excited on seeing future comics with these idiots fhdjf
# 4
Posted:
Oct 10 2021, 10:36 AM
I loved those 3, their interactions feel natural and real, that is one of your strongest points while doing comics for me. Nat and Vincent bounce so well!
Also respect for drawing all those tattoos in all those shots/angles. *chef's kiss*
Also respect for drawing all those tattoos in all those shots/angles. *chef's kiss*
# 3
Posted:
Oct 9 2021, 02:15 PM
I love their dynamic, also Vincent is a lil shit and I love him
# 2
Posted:
Oct 6 2021, 01:34 PM
This was really cool! Love the dramatic shots of the middleman smoking, and your expressions are really working! The shots came off very cinematic, and I like all how you play with camera focus in this. Also appreciate that the character is aware of his appearance and has a sense of humor about it. Looks like he'll be a lot of fun!
# 1
Posted:
Oct 5 2021, 03:46 PM
I love this intro story - it explains his purpose in Void, along with Vincent's, and has a ton of information without being overwhelming. I adore your style and how expressive everyone is here, and your backgrounds are lovely! I'm really looking forward to what Nathaniel gets up to (and Vincent!).
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