Rebel Roach vs. Rocket Punch Siouxsie
Critiques & Comments
KaterinaPoetry
1 comment
# 21
Posted:
Sep 6 2021, 07:26 AM
I am so proud of both of you for completing this and it's such an honor to have been part of this seeing it to completion. Congratulations! And as far as I'm concerned, you both won!!
# 20
Posted:
Aug 28 2021, 10:28 AM
I'm honestly just glad to see you two in action, and I think it's great that you ended up collaborating with each other. There isn't a whole lot I can say since it's clear that the both of you had a blast flexing your own styles.
Brown, welcome to Void!
Brown, welcome to Void!
# 19
Posted:
Aug 27 2021, 02:01 AM
It’s finally here!! And a two-parter too, nice. First off, idk if you worked on this script together or both did the half for your comic, but it flowed very smoothly. It felt like the same story and the characters had the same vibes despite the difference in your styles, which was cool! Onto my individual crits
Alberto - Your grungy colours and spot blacks have such a nostalgic feel! Love the detail on Rebel Roach’s suit, and how absolutely gross and feral you made Annie May (hahhhhh) look when she transforms. The energy Rebel Roach has is also great and clearly shows he’s a teenager even before the whole hentai thing. Firing some bombs and freaking out when they seem to do more damage seems VERY much like something an inexperienced kid with too much power would do. Also “harsh, I’m a roach” got a chuckle out of me.
I’d love to see you play with contrast a bit more or maybe cut down some detail in shots that are further away, because sometimes everything blended together a bit. I get the feeling the values may be pretty close together? When I look at the third panel on page 8 it takes me a few seconds to process where Roach’s body ends and where his head is.
Super cool to see you back in action though! Also to continue this battle despite having Covid, extremely powerful.
Brownkidd - Love your vibrant colours and sharp lines!! You did a great job stylising Rebel Roach too; he clearly has enough of his original design to be recognisable, but also looks totally at home in your style. The ending was great too. Someone is really gonna find her and think she’s a corpse XD One gripe I had is that sometimes there was a lot of text close together, such as page 1 and the top of page 5, maybe breaking up the bubbles would have helped! All in all still a rad comic though
Alberto - Your grungy colours and spot blacks have such a nostalgic feel! Love the detail on Rebel Roach’s suit, and how absolutely gross and feral you made Annie May (hahhhhh) look when she transforms. The energy Rebel Roach has is also great and clearly shows he’s a teenager even before the whole hentai thing. Firing some bombs and freaking out when they seem to do more damage seems VERY much like something an inexperienced kid with too much power would do. Also “harsh, I’m a roach” got a chuckle out of me.
I’d love to see you play with contrast a bit more or maybe cut down some detail in shots that are further away, because sometimes everything blended together a bit. I get the feeling the values may be pretty close together? When I look at the third panel on page 8 it takes me a few seconds to process where Roach’s body ends and where his head is.
Super cool to see you back in action though! Also to continue this battle despite having Covid, extremely powerful.
Brownkidd - Love your vibrant colours and sharp lines!! You did a great job stylising Rebel Roach too; he clearly has enough of his original design to be recognisable, but also looks totally at home in your style. The ending was great too. Someone is really gonna find her and think she’s a corpse XD One gripe I had is that sometimes there was a lot of text close together, such as page 1 and the top of page 5, maybe breaking up the bubbles would have helped! All in all still a rad comic though
# 18
Posted:
Aug 25 2021, 06:57 AM
HOW DARE YOU TWO MAKE US PICK A WINNER!! THIS IS AMAZING!
Well done! I love how both sides really jived well. It looks like one cohesive story!
Well done! I love how both sides really jived well. It looks like one cohesive story!
# 17
Posted:
Aug 24 2021, 12:02 PM
I've been looking forward to this for a while and was not let down. Awesome JobS!
# 16
Posted:
Aug 22 2021, 09:38 PM
Oh, man! I almost wish you guys had just collab’d on one comic, because now I have to rate these against each other!? But I’m glad you chose violence, because that’s what I’m here for, babyyy!
These are both awesome. I need to let them sit for a minute before I score them.
These are both awesome. I need to let them sit for a minute before I score them.
# 15
Posted:
Aug 21 2021, 07:53 PM
WOOHOO IT'S FINALLY HERE!!
You both did an impressive job with this battle, the connection between the two sides was a nice surprise!
I'm glad that you both could finish the battle and had fun with it despite the hard times Alberto had with covid...
Again, i wish you a full recovery, Alberto! And i hope we get to read more comics from you two in the future!
You both did an impressive job with this battle, the connection between the two sides was a nice surprise!
I'm glad that you both could finish the battle and had fun with it despite the hard times Alberto had with covid...
Again, i wish you a full recovery, Alberto! And i hope we get to read more comics from you two in the future!
# 14
Posted:
Aug 21 2021, 01:33 PM
Alberto311: Very impressive work!! The effort shows in this comic and you did a tremendous job. I liked the witty dialogue, and the story was easy to follow. Great job!
Brownkidd: Loved this comic! The last two jokes were awesome, I love how self-congratulatory Liam is. Very well drawn, and very impressive work.
I enjoyed the shit out of both of these, great job!
Brownkidd: Loved this comic! The last two jokes were awesome, I love how self-congratulatory Liam is. Very well drawn, and very impressive work.
I enjoyed the shit out of both of these, great job!
# 13
Posted:
Aug 21 2021, 12:27 PM
This is one interesting battle. the Quality and writing are there and these two characters are quite fun and explosive to say the least.
Great Job with these comics and hopefully we see more of these two characters in the near future!
Great Job with these comics and hopefully we see more of these two characters in the near future!
# 12
Posted:
Aug 19 2021, 11:33 AM
@brownkidd
"Are we there yet?"
😶
"Are we there yet?"
😶
# 11
Posted:
Aug 10 2021, 03:10 PM
FUCK YEAH THE HYPE IS REAL!!
Quote from: TheCydork
FUCK YEAH THE HYPE IS REAL!!
Quote from: TheCydork
Awwwww man!! I'm ready to put this out now.🤩
# 10
Posted:
Aug 10 2021, 02:46 AM
FUCK YEAH THE HYPE IS REAL!!
# 9
Posted:
Aug 9 2021, 09:39 PM
Here we gooooooo!!!!! Good luck, unc!Quote from: brownkidd
Heck yeah, Nephew!!!!
This is going to be epic! Is this the first Uncle and Nephew battle on Entervoid?!!!!!!!Quote from: alberto311
I wonder... Maybe they'll give us a plaque or something! 🏆✨
Quote from: brownkidd
I hope it's pretty with sparkly things on it! 🤩
# 8
Posted:
Aug 9 2021, 09:38 PM
awww!!! GOOD LUCK DUDES!!!
Quote from: Animeshen
"Thank You" @animeshen
# 7
Posted:
Aug 9 2021, 01:14 PM
awww!!! GOOD LUCK DUDES!!!
# 6
Posted:
Aug 9 2021, 12:58 PM
Here we gooooooo!!!!! Good luck, unc!Quote from: brownkidd
Heck yeah, Nephew!!!!
This is going to be epic! Is this the first Uncle and Nephew battle on Entervoid?!!!!!!!
Quote from: alberto311
I wonder... Maybe they'll give us a plaque or something! 🏆✨
# 5
Posted:
Aug 6 2021, 11:18 AM
Here we gooooooo!!!!! Good luck, unc!
Quote from: brownkidd
Heck yeah, Nephew!!!!
This is going to be epic! Is this the first Uncle and Nephew battle on Entervoid?!!!!!!!
# 4
Posted:
Aug 6 2021, 10:20 AM
Here we gooooooo!!!!! Good luck, unc!
# 3
Posted:
Aug 6 2021, 08:49 AM
@Footini Thank you so much!!!!! This is going to be fun!!!
# 2
Posted:
Aug 6 2021, 08:37 AM
Its happening!!
Good luck you two!!!
Good luck you two!!!
# 1
Posted:
Aug 6 2021, 08:35 AM
Oh Wow!!!!! So, this is happening! 😳 Good Luck Brownkidd! 😊
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Aug 28th, 2021
Votes Cast:
15
Page Views:
1455
Winner:
brownkidd
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