trp86 trumps in quality. Backgrounds, figures, emotions are all solid. Enjoyed the panel flow too! Nice dynamic fight scenes. Shows a lot of potential =P Good work!
delya, your emotions are good, but the lack of backgrounds is kind of irritating. Work on your establishing shots and full body views! (i think there were maybe two panels with feet in them)
good work all around, but my score definitely goes to trp86
Nex vs. Knifes
Critiques & Comments
# 52
Posted:
Mar 26 2006, 04:08 AM
# 51
Posted:
Mar 25 2006, 06:11 AM
I loved both battles....AIDS!!... The constant bickering over a burrito... Both hilarious. I drew a line right down the middle. I can\'t wait to see more from both of you.
# 50
Posted:
Mar 24 2006, 01:30 PM
Holy freaking crap. You guys BOTH rock awesomely.
# 49
Posted:
Mar 24 2006, 07:45 AM
this is going to be insanely close
# 48
Posted:
Mar 22 2006, 09:52 PM
An incredibly entertaining battle from both contestants. Well done!
Delya: as allways great art! Your charakters have a volume you hardly ever se in black n\' white art and your lineart is just to die for. Maybe a little too much space between the panels sometimes but nice layout nevertheles.
trp86: Woooh, this looks so good! I\'m not really a fan of OnePiece but your art is still mighty fine! Totally diferent than Dels but still just as good. The level of detail you put into every page is fantastic. Great sense of speed and motion in the battle sequence.
Delya: as allways great art! Your charakters have a volume you hardly ever se in black n\' white art and your lineart is just to die for. Maybe a little too much space between the panels sometimes but nice layout nevertheles.
trp86: Woooh, this looks so good! I\'m not really a fan of OnePiece but your art is still mighty fine! Totally diferent than Dels but still just as good. The level of detail you put into every page is fantastic. Great sense of speed and motion in the battle sequence.
# 47
Posted:
Mar 22 2006, 09:19 AM
By the way.....im more conmfterbale reading in manga format anyways....
# 46
Posted:
Mar 22 2006, 09:15 AM
The devout Manga fan that I am, my vote was rocked by Delya\'s \"AIDS\"....but my god, trp, your detail brings to my mind the stuff of a publish-worthy manga! I\'m still trying to get my drawing skills to that level! You got my vote, hopefully in the future my soon to come character and yours could go at it over ANOTHER random fast food item....
# 45
Posted:
Mar 21 2006, 10:36 PM
sweet!!!=D
# 44
Posted:
Mar 21 2006, 08:24 PM
AIIIDDDDS! =D
# 43
Posted:
Mar 21 2006, 04:20 PM
Kid, your battle had me ROLLIN\'. I\'m so sorry for not giving it my all...or much of anything, for that matter. x0x I totally owe you a good fight. And I\'ll give ya one if you\'re up to it at some point.
# 42
Posted:
Mar 21 2006, 03:35 PM
Holy shit yo!!!!!!!!!! Delya your style is freakin aaaaawwwweeeessome. man I would\'ve got my assss whupppped if u turned in somethin for ur Dean fight. Trp ur story was funny too, man I wish i had skills like yall...... Cause both of you are good as helll. mann I sorry but both of yall get straight A\'s across the board from me, you definitely deserve it. =D
# 41
Posted:
Mar 21 2006, 11:03 AM
Both were VERY good entries, but my vote goes to Delya. I like One Piece a lot... but when people use that art (even for background) it\'s a little distracting. I expect to see Luffy pop out at any time. Otherwise I really liked both. REALLY liked both.
# 40
Posted:
Mar 21 2006, 02:30 AM
Lol, i love the last panel, nex \"AIDS!\"
teeheehee
teeheehee
# 39
Posted:
Mar 20 2006, 09:51 PM
Delya dude, that was buckwild man... \"AIDS\". I loved that.
Keep on rocking the comics man.
Keep on rocking the comics man.
# 38
Posted:
Mar 20 2006, 06:26 PM
both comics were great! i\'ll have to give it to knifes th becuase of quality but entertainment was equal on both parts. i read mostly manga so i automatically start reading from the right, so i didnt bother me.
# 37
Posted:
Mar 20 2006, 03:38 PM
Hahah..I...can\'t ..decide.. x_o;
# 36
Posted:
Mar 20 2006, 03:32 AM
Good luck to both of you! =D
AMAZING BATTLES! @0@ <3<3<3
AMAZING BATTLES! @0@ <3<3<3
# 35
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 08:13 PM
WOW both of these comics are so SUPERB!~
It is SO hard to choose. Good job to both of you on both comedy AND action.
Best person win.
It is SO hard to choose. Good job to both of you on both comedy AND action.
Best person win.
# 34
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 07:09 PM
Agh! I can\'t decide. Both were very entertaining.
Trp\'s background detail was amazing and Delya\'s facial expressions were priceless.
It will be tough to decide.
Trp\'s background detail was amazing and Delya\'s facial expressions were priceless.
It will be tough to decide.
# 33
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 07:03 PM
trp86, the fight sequences were incredible as was your artwork. I found that your submission held more substance, but still managed to remain humorous. You really seemed to strive to reach high points on all 3 voting. This is excellent. Please keep up the good work.
Delya, your punchline was hillarious, and the top 3 panels on page 8 were incredible for their poignancy. You\'re heading in the right direction. I look forward to seeing how your character develops.
Delya, your punchline was hillarious, and the top 3 panels on page 8 were incredible for their poignancy. You\'re heading in the right direction. I look forward to seeing how your character develops.
# 32
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 06:35 PM
Lol
-selling treasure on the black market- $40,000
-Missing bean burrito-$4.50
-getting aids from the stump of a finger an anthro chick JUST cut off....priceless...
seriously though i loved both of these, trp your art is great and so is delya. I actually think these are both funny, with a nod in comedy to Delya. Whereas the art nod goes to trp. So all in all, TIE!!!
-selling treasure on the black market- $40,000
-Missing bean burrito-$4.50
-getting aids from the stump of a finger an anthro chick JUST cut off....priceless...
seriously though i loved both of these, trp your art is great and so is delya. I actually think these are both funny, with a nod in comedy to Delya. Whereas the art nod goes to trp. So all in all, TIE!!!
# 31
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 05:30 PM
Geez, this is another hard one.
TRP\'s comic has the best in art quality while Del\'s has the best in humor. I might vote these two as a tie.
TRP\'s comic has the best in art quality while Del\'s has the best in humor. I might vote these two as a tie.
# 30
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 05:18 PM
*sniff sniff* I smell OP!! Very good work trp, I mean shit, clean and well drawn!! Sure the influence is obvious, but you did it well and didn\'t totally copy, so who cares. You\'ve really really improved chicky, I\'m really impressed.
Great job on your part too Nex, you have a great sense of humour and a good nose for dynamic composition. I think you both did extremely well here, and I hope to see more from you both again soon!
Great job on your part too Nex, you have a great sense of humour and a good nose for dynamic composition. I think you both did extremely well here, and I hope to see more from you both again soon!
# 29
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 05:00 PM
haha yes as said on my bio, I\'ve been -extremely- influenced by one piece and when that happens whatever I do tends to end up looking that way. I\'m working on getting out of it though, because I can\'t be basing off my style/story-telling skills etc off someone esle\'s forever. There are a lot of blatant OP references in my fight which I think I could have done better on, but eh.
Comment and harsh critiques on my pages would be very much appreciated. ESP on the humans because I really suck at those. Thank you.
Comment and harsh critiques on my pages would be very much appreciated. ESP on the humans because I really suck at those. Thank you.
# 28
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 04:56 PM
too mcu manga? you mean too much one piece? either way I really enjoyed your fight trp. good laughs all the way! maybe you could\'ve upped the contrast on the images though. but that\'s just me knit picking.
delya, as said your pages look a bit empty. nice with the big panels though so you get all that nice n sharp detail you work so well. fight was ok but the last panel really left me laughing.
I thought it was pretty hard to cast the votes between you. pretty tight.
maybe a rematch someday? *wink wink*
delya, as said your pages look a bit empty. nice with the big panels though so you get all that nice n sharp detail you work so well. fight was ok but the last panel really left me laughing.
I thought it was pretty hard to cast the votes between you. pretty tight.
maybe a rematch someday? *wink wink*
# 27
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 04:42 PM
OMG Love. Both of these are beautiful and awesome and entertaining as hell! It\'s hard to make a choice...
# 26
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 04:29 PM
Oh god, no~ XDD You\'re gonna own ME. You\'re so freakin\' PRO, it amazes me. And thank you SO MUCH for the critique~ <3 I was hoping you\'d do so. Your stuff owns. Period. XD And all that detail makes it more awesome, imho. I suck at drawing backgrounds. Oh so much sucking... D: Make the sucking stop and show me the ways of the BACKGROUND ARTEEST.
TRP, you rock. I\'m so glad to have you back.
TRP, you rock. I\'m so glad to have you back.
# 25
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 04:21 PM
OMG SHIT FUCK WHY IS THIS UP EARLIER THAN ITS SUPPOSED TO BE BUT THANK YOU. OMG. *SPAZ SPAZ*
DELYA. WTFH. I HATE YOU. OMG YOU RENDERED KNIFES SO AWESOMELY IT MAKES ME CRY. WTFH. HE GAVE HER AIDS HAHAHAHAHAHAHA XDDDDD WTFH!! *incoherrent* OMG LOVE. AND SHE CHOPPED HIS MIDDLE FINGER OFF WTFH! I DON\'T KNOW WHETHER TO LOVE YOU OR HATE YOU ARGHARGH
*foams at mouth* FUCKFUCKFUCK PAGE 5 PANEL BOTTOM LEFT WINS ARGH
*cough* anyway, um. With regards to my sanity and overabuse of the capslock, I\'d like to say that I really like your use of inking, notably on page4. Actually, the whole damn comic. the expressions are awesome too; I love Nex\'s stunned face just before she goes ballastic on him XD I also like the way you panelled the close ups on page eight, though it was a little unclear where her dagger was position in panel 3, BUT THE PANEL AFTER THAT MADE UP FOR IT SO. *cough*
Critque is encouraged in void so... Squeeing aside, I do find your pages to look a bit on the empty side when they aren\'t rendered in full color (you surprised me, I thought you would have! Then I would have gotten totally owned lolol XD ). Considering that you did in in trad media, it\'s quite different from the other black and white style you used for the battle between you and Rok, possible because now there\'s too much white space as opposed to having too much black. Maybe balance it out a bit with slightly more background detail? (I should just stuff it right now considering mine are overloaded and crammed with way too many distracting detail.) But yeah. Regardless, I LOVE all nine pages of these, really, I do XD; Thank you for the fight!
(PS I\'m totally getting owned now as it is lol XD You\'re going to own my ass so hard.)
DELYA. WTFH. I HATE YOU. OMG YOU RENDERED KNIFES SO AWESOMELY IT MAKES ME CRY. WTFH. HE GAVE HER AIDS HAHAHAHAHAHAHA XDDDDD WTFH!! *incoherrent* OMG LOVE. AND SHE CHOPPED HIS MIDDLE FINGER OFF WTFH! I DON\'T KNOW WHETHER TO LOVE YOU OR HATE YOU ARGHARGH
*foams at mouth* FUCKFUCKFUCK PAGE 5 PANEL BOTTOM LEFT WINS ARGH
*cough* anyway, um. With regards to my sanity and overabuse of the capslock, I\'d like to say that I really like your use of inking, notably on page4. Actually, the whole damn comic. the expressions are awesome too; I love Nex\'s stunned face just before she goes ballastic on him XD I also like the way you panelled the close ups on page eight, though it was a little unclear where her dagger was position in panel 3, BUT THE PANEL AFTER THAT MADE UP FOR IT SO. *cough*
Critque is encouraged in void so... Squeeing aside, I do find your pages to look a bit on the empty side when they aren\'t rendered in full color (you surprised me, I thought you would have! Then I would have gotten totally owned lolol XD ). Considering that you did in in trad media, it\'s quite different from the other black and white style you used for the battle between you and Rok, possible because now there\'s too much white space as opposed to having too much black. Maybe balance it out a bit with slightly more background detail? (I should just stuff it right now considering mine are overloaded and crammed with way too many distracting detail.) But yeah. Regardless, I LOVE all nine pages of these, really, I do XD; Thank you for the fight!
(PS I\'m totally getting owned now as it is lol XD You\'re going to own my ass so hard.)
# 24
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 03:57 PM
Oh man, TRP~ that gave my friend and I a good laugh. XD I love the last page with the short panel sequences. 8D STABBITTY.
# 23
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 02:35 PM
Shit folks, awesome submissions from both sides I gotta say that this read was a refreshing pace for me. And man Trp, you pulled off your contrasts and lines really well and your panelling and action packed pacing is just as clean. As for Del, while it was almost opposite in practice is just as good and unique in her own way. I\'m liking the style that both of you are taking up in here but most of all the confidence you two had in expressing your aces. But overall, Trp won out on story content but in battle dynamic I think you two just about tied with Del one hair ahead. I\'m really kissing the curb trying to decide this one, even though I liked Trp\'s more.
# 22
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 05:10 AM
Apologies in advance to all the readers, because my battle is panelled in the right-to-left format. I\'m aware I\'m going to get severely flamed for this, and I\'ll probably desevre it for trying to be a wannabe. My next battles will resume in the usual left-to-right. Thanks and sorry for the trouble.
Can\'t wait to see your side, Del.
Can\'t wait to see your side, Del.
# 21
Posted:
Mar 19 2006, 02:55 AM
I\'m on a shatty computer, so I had RenderNinja upload my battle for me. :B Buuuh, I\'m so nervous. D:
# 20
Posted:
Mar 10 2006, 11:39 AM
TRP = The fastest artist in the west.
# 19
Posted:
Mar 9 2006, 07:37 PM
Really looking forward to reading this. Gonna be some great art in this one.
# 18
Posted:
Mar 8 2006, 01:08 PM
Damn, TRP you\'re fast. XD;;; I\'m still doing my lineart.
# 17
Posted:
Mar 7 2006, 05:49 AM
Just traditional black and white inks. I\'m not too good with coloring. (If Delya does hers in color (which she probably will) I am SO dead. lol)
# 16
Posted:
Mar 7 2006, 05:45 AM
Lol? Speed paint?
# 15
Posted:
Mar 7 2006, 02:19 AM
Uploaded mine. *nervous nervous*
# 14
Posted:
Feb 25 2006, 06:22 PM
Nex was retired for a while coz I was moving from SoCal back up to NorCal and I didn\'t want anyone to challenge me while I was away. 0: But now I\'m pretty much settled and ready for this battle. >D
Dean is still retired because I just can\'t seem to write anything decent for him when I go to battle. x_x But he will be appearing in a Beyond Battle soon.
Dean is still retired because I just can\'t seem to write anything decent for him when I go to battle. x_x But he will be appearing in a Beyond Battle soon.
# 13
Posted:
Feb 25 2006, 12:51 PM
Great to see you back again, TRP!
# 12
Posted:
Feb 24 2006, 10:17 PM
Speaking of retirement, why did you retire Dean again?
# 11
Posted:
Feb 24 2006, 05:57 PM
Hey, was it just me or did I see Nex retired for a little while about a week or two ago? In any case, I\'m glad that\'s not the case!
Good luck you two! I\'m really lookin forward to this! *Swig*
Good luck you two! I\'m really lookin forward to this! *Swig*
# 10
Posted:
Feb 24 2006, 01:15 PM
Trust me, only an act of God...or the other guy...can make me default outta this. >D I shall give it my best- or Nex\'s worst. *lightning strikes in the distance* o_o ...okay, maybe not that. *brick\'d*
# 9
Posted:
Feb 24 2006, 03:05 AM
Yeesh, two of void\'s deadliest female artists having a go at each other... I Cannot wait!
# 8
Posted:
Feb 23 2006, 09:52 PM
Del: I hope whatever shit I put out will be worthy of your fight @.@
Mtt: My ass belongs to no one! :O But yes, I\'m all ready to duel with you.
Mtt: My ass belongs to no one! :O But yes, I\'m all ready to duel with you.
# 7
Posted:
Feb 23 2006, 09:26 PM
She\'s on my hitlist too =D
# 6
Posted:
Feb 23 2006, 09:09 PM
WOw Trp you\'re going in my hitlist !
# 5
Posted:
Feb 23 2006, 08:32 PM
hey trp... your ass is mine next. you know that, right? lol
Now let\'s see a good battle out of you two. Defaults will result in your being eaten alive from the inside out.
Now let\'s see a good battle out of you two. Defaults will result in your being eaten alive from the inside out.
# 4
Posted:
Feb 23 2006, 07:17 PM
I want a good clean havoc battle outta both of you D: <
# 3
Posted:
Feb 23 2006, 02:10 PM
oh shits, this promises to be good!
# 2
Posted:
Feb 23 2006, 01:28 PM
I\'m so gonna get OWN\'D. XD But I\'m just glad that you\'re back, TRP~ <3
# 1
Posted:
Feb 23 2006, 10:27 AM
Nutty: Good luck fightin\' dat furball.
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