I already gave feedback in your app process, BUT JUST FOR POSTERITY!
This is neckbreaking caliber fast introduction. It is literally falling outta the sky speedy with how they make it to void. Also, I'm guessing they're indestructible due to the impact of landing? Or should we expect your first battle to be with Slayeyes in traction? I'm all about powers and near god like abilities- they kind of come with the welcome package of coming to void, but I certainly hope we get to know this character beyond the pomp and circumstance.
Intro Story / Slayeyes
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# 6
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Sep 26 2016, 12:22 PM
# 5
Posted:
Sep 21 2016, 08:16 PM
Corn Of The Breads: ...it is nothing major just feels little happens, it works to show us the character but could have shown more of the world.
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I kept it pretty bare bones, i'm sure it does leave a lot to be desired for an intro. I like to think that all i did was literally drop a character with unlimited power somewhere near void city. Probably not the smoothest idea, but I've always wanted to normally submit a character. finally got to it. thanks for the crits guys ^ ^
# 4
Posted:
Sep 21 2016, 06:46 AM
This style RULES!! absolutely love the way you do lighting haha. my only critique is similar to corn's where it would've been nice to see more of the setting this boi's in but definitely looking forward to seeing more!!!
# 3
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Sep 20 2016, 01:42 PM
This looks amazing the art style is great, my only criticism is I feel we could have gotten a more clear idea of the city and why he would need his full set of powers, it is nothing major just feels little happens, it works to show us the character but could have shown more of the world.
# 2
Posted:
Sep 19 2016, 07:41 PM
Charlie: ITS DAT BOI AND I AM GONNA BE GUNNING FOR YOU SOON DUDE JUST YOU WAIT
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# 1
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Sep 19 2016, 04:50 PM
ITS DAT BOI AND I AM GONNA BE GUNNING FOR YOU SOON DUDE JUST YOU WAIT
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I like to think that even with that amount of resource and power, can become insignificant if one lacks the proper creativity and resolution to apply themselves. I want that as a sort of theme with Slayeyes, someone fragility thinking he's safe with his access to all the knowledge and advances of the progressing future. Only to quickly learn that it might just take more than that to have real power. Also, I'm lazy when it comes to picking powers lol.