The Jailbird's Guide to Making Friends / Gold and Talon

The Jailbird's Guide to Making Friends — Gold and Talon

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Camel
Artist

151 comments

# 8 Posted: Nov 8 2021, 02:06 PM

One thing I always loved about your collaborations was how naturalistic the posing and lighting was in ya'lls comics. They just feel so real, in that ephemeral way. A shame to see you leave Void, Cy, but you had a fantastic run.

Flytee
Community Manager

353 comments

# 7 Posted: Oct 15 2021, 09:35 AM

I loved everything about this, really happy to see some Gold & Talon comics, I look forward to seeing this friendship unfold!

Kilcra
Artist

75 comments

# 6 Posted: Oct 15 2021, 09:24 AM

I liked this a lot! Talon was super relatable, and I felt his sadness and fear in this new and scary situation. I imagine it must be terrifying to be in a holding cell for the first time, and I think you handled this maturely and intimately. The two characters work off each other so nicely too, they're such opposites. Beautiful colors and lovely lighting as well. Great work on this!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist

570 comments

# 5 Posted: Oct 12 2021, 06:15 PM

A blossoming friendship.
I love the little detail of Gold flexing his claws when the cuffs come off, Talon flinching away from Gold's hand when the pick is nabbed.
Wonderful all around!!!

RamenBean18
Artist

89 comments

# 4 Posted: Oct 12 2021, 04:25 PM

This is such an adorable and really calming comic to read! Great job guys!!! ☺️ Colors are lovely, and the characters are amazing!!

ManDemolition
Artist

6 comments

# 3 Posted: Oct 12 2021, 09:12 AM

Always love a bit of extra lore and fluff to flesh out characters.

Can't really say much more beyond the fact that it's very nice, pleasing to see, and easy to read.