Kozispoon: I think the only moment I wish stood out more was the big reveal that Kubo could bring people back from the dead. I know VOID is a fantastical place, but bringing someone back to life is a huge deal, yet Kubo and Kurt discuss it like they're gonna pick up some eggs at the market. A couple extra panels to show the weight of that reveal and Kurts shock over it I think would've helped alot.
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You're right, looking back, I was hoping that Kirt's reaction would have been enough but the intensity of page 4 really diminishes it.
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I would add that divising the dialogue in two segment with an additionnal panel would have happened