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GO FOR BROKE! / Re: Living in a new Light
« on: Mar 05, 2007, 09:02 PM »
I'm not so good at critiques but here goes.
The muscle guy: I like the cartoony-ness your getting better at that and it gives your figures life, I also like that you appear to be working on muscles and a bit on line-width even on rough sketches. Keep varying the linewidth, You mixed it up good at the top but as you get further down you lose it, for example you could thicken the lines under the jaw to give it more definition. Also with the muscles you might want to work a little more on accuracy most of the lines on the arm seem pretty random. Still a good effort.

2nd: Again I'm seeing some good stuff here. I like the details and backgrounds are always good also the character design is kinda interesting. The figures torso seems to be a bit stretched out and his pose is awkward. I see you've got the lines thickened to make it pop more from the background, although the effect isn't as good with the pencils as it would be with sharper blacks. Your perspective in the background seems a bit off too. I like the feel of the black designs in the background but at the same time they seem distracting from the main image. You should work more with layouts and dynamic poses, start thinking about how to draw attention to your subject.

Well thats all I can think of.

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GO FOR BROKE! / Re: Day After yesterday.
« on: Jan 16, 2007, 10:47 PM »
Monday. You make me regret my lack of armageddoness,

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VOID University / Re: VCU Library – Recommended Reading
« on: Oct 17, 2006, 08:44 PM »
Don't judge scott by his first attempt at digital art Phil. A lot of artists can improve over time.

Here is a scan from the book.


I'm reluctant to post this because spikes intimidates the hell out of me.

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Resources & Tutorials / Creating a Tridimensional Character
« on: Aug 07, 2006, 04:09 PM »
Subject to change at anytime cause I are a bastid.

Girl / Agent 8

PHYSIOLOGY
1. Sex/Gender: Female
2. Age: 22
3. Height 5 ft
    Weight: 80-ish lbs.
4. Color of Hair: Black with blue stripes(dyed).
    Eyes: Purple.
    Skin: Caucasian, fair complexion, incapable of tanning.
5. Posture: Normally casual/relaxed. Hunched when looking evil and menacing.
6. Appearance: Short with large breasts and wide hips. 3 piercings on each ear, tongue stud, navel piercing, 3 other piercings not normally seen. Hair a little longer than shoulder length. Clothing changes but usually with a punk aesthetic. Almost always wears gloves and a white circle patch with a sideways 8 in it, which is her personal logo.
7. Defects: Chemical imbalance in brain.
8. Heredity: She inherited most of her physical features from her mother except her skin color and nose, which she got from her father. I did a single page joke comic in which Monty Chomps claimed to be her father but that was just a star wars joke. Probably. Unless I decide it isn't.

SOCIOLOGY

1. Social Class: Middle class.
2. Occupation : Odd job mercenary, thief, substitute teacher, etc...
3. Education : No formal schooling. Assorted agent training. Can produce certifications for any number of occupations.
4. Home Life : She has a room above a garage(mechanic) that belongs to a friend of hers. She attempts to pay rent when she can. Her real parents have no importance beyond the fact that they produced her and then sold her. She was raised in a government facility and regards her fellow agents as surrogate siblings.
5. Race: Human / White/NHPI (Native Hawaiian and Other Pacific Islander - US Census Classification)
6. Religion: Bits of catholicism, Buddhism.
    Nationality: Multi-national.
7. Place in Community : Has built a small amount of reputation amongst the underworld as a troublemaker. Hasn't been in Void long enough to make much of an impact.
8. Political affiliations: Usually whoever is paying her. Has no real opinions believing that politics usually just obscure who has the real power.
9. Amusements/Hobbies : Enjoys heavy metal and is a mediocre guitar player. Motorcycle racing. Old samurai movies.
10. Time Period/Era : Now-ish.

PSYCHOLOGY

1. Moral Standards: Largely amoral. Refuses to kill for hire but isn't usually bothered at the incidental deaths during the course of a job. Extreme dislike for violence against children.
2. Personal Premise/Ambition: Her only major goal is to be rich enough to never have to work again.
3. Frustrations: Boredom and people getting in her way.
4. Temperament : Vain, self-centered, reckless, tends to be extemely irritable when bored.
5. Attitude toward Life : "Take life easy. But don't take shit from nobody."
6. Complexes : Beserker tendencies. Strong dislike for dirt and filth.
7. Extrovert
8. Abilities : Can speak a large number of languages and possesses an eclectic mix of skills from her time as an agent. Uses a hand to hand fighting style derived from kickboxing and regular boxing. She has a special shape changing weapon which she uses in either a scythe, a kusarigama, or a chain. She has high level regeneration powers that are limited storywise by a number of factors and practically by the needs of the story. She has slightly enhanced physical abilities such as speed, strength and reflexes. Resistance to poison, disease, alcohol, drugs, etc. High tolerence for pain.
9. Qualities : Highly loyal to her friends. She also has a great deal of practical leadership and organizational abilities though she routinely denies it.
10. IQ: 139 (She's smarter than she acts.)
11. Time Period/Era : Modern

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Resources & Tutorials / Creating a Tridimensional Character
« on: Aug 05, 2006, 12:52 AM »
Link for those having trouble with IQ. http://hem.bredband.net/b153434/Index.htm#TableI
I can't vouch for the scientific accuracy of this link (It seems kinda suspect to me...) but it might work as a simple guideline for our purposes.

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