Intro Story / Roidmantis
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Oct 3 2015, 01:52 AM
Thanks so much everyone. I thought I'd play up to my strengths with this character, I love drawing a muscular torso, all those lumps and bumps give you a lot to play around with. I'm also a bug nut so that's where the insect part came from. The intro story is pretty simple but I thought I'd give his tale a simple start and build his character through the comic strips. I'm really looking to up my game with my art and I know Entervoid is the place to do that
# 13
Posted:
Oct 2 2015, 05:20 PM
I love Roidmantis!
A great combination, Muscles and Praying Mantises, can;t wait to have a go at drawing him!
Really cool comic too the colours are beautiful and the more graphic elements work really well. Adds that more physical oomph that Roidmantis himself has.
A great combination, Muscles and Praying Mantises, can;t wait to have a go at drawing him!
Really cool comic too the colours are beautiful and the more graphic elements work really well. Adds that more physical oomph that Roidmantis himself has.
# 12
Posted:
Sep 30 2015, 04:12 PM
Simultaneously trippy and funny. To top it off the art is really well done. I look forward to seeing him munch some brains around the Void
# 11
Posted:
Sep 29 2015, 08:02 AM
Fixed the pages. Make sure to view them at actual size in whatever program you're using to save them, and if there's a magnifying glass when you view the page in your browser, be sure to click on the image to view it at actual size instead of the automatically resized version browsers usually show by default.
That said, the quality of this comic is fantastic and I can't wait to actually read it!
That said, the quality of this comic is fantastic and I can't wait to actually read it!
# 10
Posted:
Sep 28 2015, 12:55 AM
fastcrit:
ctrl-scroll/- can work, but in the future it might be easier to just make two versions of the page: one full HQ quality for print, one for online publishing. 800px-900px width might help.
Artists format their work for online publishing specifically for a reason, just in case people can't be arsed to do the zoom-out trick/can't figure it out/there's no way to do it.
Aside from that, your character is really cute, these pages have good polish, and I look forward to seeing your guy kill lotsa food.
ctrl-scroll/- can work, but in the future it might be easier to just make two versions of the page: one full HQ quality for print, one for online publishing. 800px-900px width might help.
Artists format their work for online publishing specifically for a reason, just in case people can't be arsed to do the zoom-out trick/can't figure it out/there's no way to do it.
Aside from that, your character is really cute, these pages have good polish, and I look forward to seeing your guy kill lotsa food.
# 9
Posted:
Sep 27 2015, 10:23 PM
William_Duel: Yeah I can vouch that these pages did not originally look to be this big. Maybe a glitch?
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Are there any means to resize them?
Kozispoon: Had such trouble reading these pages since they're so huge!
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You can scale down a web page by pressing ctrl and the minus key
# 8
Posted:
Sep 27 2015, 09:16 PM
Had such trouble reading these pages since they're so huge, but from what little I could discern scrolling around from panel to panel, it looks pretty promising (though considering your choice of insect, I'm surprised this guy isn't female?)
Here's hoping we get a more sizable first battle from you soon!
Here's hoping we get a more sizable first battle from you soon!
# 7
Posted:
Sep 27 2015, 08:20 PM
Yeah I can vouch that these pages did not originally look to be this big. Maybe a glitch?
# 6
Posted:
Sep 27 2015, 01:40 PM
Yeah I had to zoom my browser out super far just to read these, but once I did that holy crap these pages are awesome haha. I love this character, also nice art!!
# 5
Posted:
Sep 27 2015, 12:56 PM
PyrasTerran: whaaaat these pages are enormous
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I know, they looked fine when I uploaded them :/
# 4
Posted:
Sep 27 2015, 09:18 AM
whaaaat these pages are enormous
# 3
Posted:
Sep 27 2015, 02:16 AM
Thanks so much, really looking forward to getting involved
# 2
Posted:
Sep 26 2015, 11:05 PM
This is great!! Start battling!
# 1
Posted:
Sep 26 2015, 05:02 PM
Congrats! Now all will know the mantis' magnificence
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