Ponbiki.  The first two pages are obviously the best, great work on them!!  The rain effect rocked.  The mood, the setting, the characters, everything just radiates with coolness.  The last three pages even though you obviously couldn\'t finish them still have the basis of all that.  Your pacing, camera direction, and choreography shine through.  Good job man.  Good job!

sorry void fans. i ponbiki have had a few minor computer problems as of lately. i was not able to finish my pages to my full ability but i did turn something in. also i have a few deadlines so i could not focus to much on my fight. please enjoy. atleast i learned to do the rain effect. sorry again.