seeker: it's okay, it happened to me before. Shame you didn't finish, begins fabulously and I hope you will actually complete it sometime cos I'd love to read the whole thing...
RabbitRabbit: I'm glad That's like the only funny thing in there lol
Base: I usually first write script and then plan pages, so no, I didn't just write it out as I went along. I'm not superhappy with the story, but I thought I will run out of time if I faff for too long with it. I suppose it would have been difficult to follow if you didn't know the characters background, but otherwise I am not sure what the problem could be - if you don't mind further explanation.
Lophii Formes vs. Sebastian Rockwell
Critiques & Comments
# 6
Posted:
Mar 1 2010, 06:38 AM
# 5
Posted:
Feb 27 2010, 11:07 PM
Fern: Congrats on finishing on time! But I noticed a few things. First of all, the story was really haphazard-- it was difficult to tell what was going on. If it weren't for the dialogue, I'd have no idea what was happening from panel to panel and page to page. Did you kind of just write it out as you went a long? Planning the angles and deciding where you want to place your characters in the frame will go a long way for you, I think. Good stuff though, I laughed at that picture too lol. Keep up the hard work!
Seeker: It happens, I don't think it's a big deal for one or two battles so long as you don't make a habit of it. What you had seemed pretty solid, and at least now you have an idea of how long this takes for you now as well.
Seeker: It happens, I don't think it's a big deal for one or two battles so long as you don't make a habit of it. What you had seemed pretty solid, and at least now you have an idea of how long this takes for you now as well.
# 4
Posted:
Feb 27 2010, 09:44 PM
I have to say, I hit the floor laughing when he revealed his fiancee's picture, Fern. XD
# 3
Posted:
Feb 18 2010, 05:48 AM
UPLOADED!
For the first time in my life I finished something few days before the deadline! I am sure proud, especially after the previous failure. Although it ends with a bit of an anticlimax, I can't think of anything else...
For the first time in my life I finished something few days before the deadline! I am sure proud, especially after the previous failure. Although it ends with a bit of an anticlimax, I can't think of anything else...
# 2
Posted:
Feb 16 2010, 05:38 AM
Can't WAIT!
# 1
Posted:
Jan 23 2010, 11:59 PM
Portal Battle.
'Nuff said.
'Nuff said.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks + 1
Ended:
Mar 6th, 2010
Votes Cast:
21
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2185
Winner:
Fearn
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Twilight, this looked like the start of something good. Better luck next time.