9 to 5 vs. Burmeister

9 to 5 vs. Burmeister

by Fred

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226 points
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This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.

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235 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
My god what have I done ;u;
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Footini
Artist
359 comments
# 6   Posted: May 19 2021, 06:48 AM
Seems an appropriate reaction to breaking a coffee pot

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
570 comments
# 5   Posted: May 18 2021, 03:39 PM
I didnt know Count Burmeister had all that land, or that 925 had such an incredible passion for coffee

TheCydork
Artist
606 comments
# 4   Posted: May 15 2021, 06:30 AM
Fred - I actually had no idea the title Count meant to own a county, I learnt something today haha. Good gag as usual, but I think the last panel could have been omitted.

Pizza Man - I love that this is essentially a hostage situation over fucking taxes and a coffee machine. The energy in this was so fun, I really enjoyed reading it. Some great shots too, I’m a fan of the reversed speech bubble in the rear view mirror and the glasses shot especially. My only complaint is the sketchiness of some panels!

Platinumartist
Approval Committee
177 comments
# 3   Posted: May 13 2021, 06:00 PM
Both the stories here was pretty good and I had a grand time reading through them!

9-5: Great job with doing the Count Burmeister Model. You are getting much better with Blender buddy!

Count Burmeister: that was a thrilling ride from beginning to end and it was a fun story to read along.

Great job to the both of you and I can't wait to see where these two will take to their next adventure!

InvaderDiz
Artist
87 comments
# 2   Posted: May 13 2021, 07:16 AM
Fred, I am forever in love with your style and the deadpan nature of 9-5. This was a fantastically dry and funny entry as always.

Pizza Man, this was entertaining and creative and there are parts of this that look very very good. I’m especially fond of the panel with the broken coffee cup. I think more of it looks better than some of the other stuff I’ve personally seen from you. In places it looks kind of sketchy and hard to decipher and just a little off, but there are other places that look like I might see this on tv with a very intentional messy style. I love those parts. Even the parts I don’t like visually are carried by creativity and entertainment. Very well done!

Fred
Artist
550 comments
# 1   Posted: May 13 2021, 02:52 AM
only "mildy" attractive? :0

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