Pepper- your comic was so warm and cosy, it was really neat seeing the use of dynamic, interesting angles in a non-action scene, It made for some very unique visuals.
I love you captured Art's mellow off-duty side. This was a lovely moment. Fantastic job!
Faster Than Light Tournament, Round 2 / Art Mishra vs. Pepper Mini
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
Jan 17 2022, 07:20 AM
# 6
Posted:
Jan 16 2022, 07:21 PM
Dang! These are some fun comics to read! You guys did great!
Flytee - I just Loved how you incorporated the Minis in your NDAverse by making them killer Fae which falls in line with how Fae's tend to be at times. Great job and I hope to see more of Art!
Pepper - OMG The Minis are so freakin' cute!!!! I can't stand it! Man the paneling was great and I hope to see more of the Mins in the near future!
Flytee - I just Loved how you incorporated the Minis in your NDAverse by making them killer Fae which falls in line with how Fae's tend to be at times. Great job and I hope to see more of Art!
Pepper - OMG The Minis are so freakin' cute!!!! I can't stand it! Man the paneling was great and I hope to see more of the Mins in the near future!
# 5
Posted:
Jan 15 2022, 06:44 PM
Flytee: I love whatever brush you used on this, it's the perfect level of clean-yet-sketchy for these 24 hour comics! story-wise, I actually think I liked this round better than the last one. The buildup of horror was really nicely done, and the reveal of the monster-minis was adequately spoopy. Admittedly I'm not sure how I feel about the choice to make the Minis a malevolent force--it feels out of character in a way that the previous interpretations of characters haven't. That said, I understand why you made that choice and it paid off so -shrugs- Poor poor traumatized David tho XD
Pepper: Once again your sketches are so clear that I really don't mind that the lines are simply sketches! The splashes of color were a nice touch--the fact that you had enough time to do even a little color is really commendable! Unfortunately, though, I feel the story this time wasn't quite as poignant as last round. It felt a little... empty? It was certainly sweet and heartwarming but it didn't really hold any weight beyond that. With the previous round we got some really good introspection, but this one it was just a straightforward bit of cuteness.
Pepper: Once again your sketches are so clear that I really don't mind that the lines are simply sketches! The splashes of color were a nice touch--the fact that you had enough time to do even a little color is really commendable! Unfortunately, though, I feel the story this time wasn't quite as poignant as last round. It felt a little... empty? It was certainly sweet and heartwarming but it didn't really hold any weight beyond that. With the previous round we got some really good introspection, but this one it was just a straightforward bit of cuteness.
# 3
Posted:
Jan 14 2022, 12:18 PM
well, scoob, i'm dying to know [strike]what's inside[/strike] how Flytee would roast my characters when she imports them to the NDAverse
roast here meaning to razz, to critique with humor
roast here meaning to razz, to critique with humor
# 2
Posted:
Jan 14 2022, 12:37 AM
Reread and...
It hit me hard: duh the diamond was intentional. It worked into your transformation and 'monster' form XD
Poor David is sitting there, slightly traumatized.
It hit me hard: duh the diamond was intentional. It worked into your transformation and 'monster' form XD
Poor David is sitting there, slightly traumatized.
# 1
Posted:
Jan 14 2022, 12:07 AM
XD
Flytee, I have never seen someone have Mini so in character and out of character at the same time.
I know that you meant for there to be the ooc, so no worries there. X3 Just kinda wild how the more potentially horrifying/frustrating aspect of Minis are shifted to the fore where their actual nature is downplayed.
(one of the rules after all is 'mini can eat anything she perceives to be 'noms'... so yeah. I mean, you aren't wrong XD)
Somehow the return of the diamond mouth amuses me to no end.
Like, before it was more like a 'why does this keep happening?' sort of thing... But I get the vibe here that all the choices with what you did were mindful and intended. x3
Thanks for the fun battle. Hopefully we someday will be able to battle/collab some time under less strict circumstances.
Flytee, I have never seen someone have Mini so in character and out of character at the same time.
I know that you meant for there to be the ooc, so no worries there. X3 Just kinda wild how the more potentially horrifying/frustrating aspect of Minis are shifted to the fore where their actual nature is downplayed.
(one of the rules after all is 'mini can eat anything she perceives to be 'noms'... so yeah. I mean, you aren't wrong XD)
Somehow the return of the diamond mouth amuses me to no end.
Like, before it was more like a 'why does this keep happening?' sort of thing... But I get the vibe here that all the choices with what you did were mindful and intended. x3
Thanks for the fun battle. Hopefully we someday will be able to battle/collab some time under less strict circumstances.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
24 hours
Ended:
Jan 15th, 2022
Votes Cast:
19
Page Views:
836
Winner:
Flytee
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Flytee - I love your idea of the minis, little crazy evil things that act cute is one of my favorite things.
Pepper - Seeing the minis always cooperate and help is super wholesome! They remind me of something I love, the Pikmins!