Faster Than Light Tournament, Round 2 / Art Mishra vs. Pepper Mini

Faster Than Light Tournament, Round 2 — Art Mishra vs. Pepper Mini

by Flytee

This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.

Icon for Art Mishra 53.1%
431 points
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Crit level: No preference


This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

Icon for Pepper Mini46.9%
381 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
GAAAAAH RUSH MODE!
tags: art mishra, pepper mini, surprise mini!




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IItherockmanII
Artist
185 comments
# 8   Posted: Jan 18 2022, 10:07 AM
I match made in heaven.

Flytee - I love your idea of the minis, little crazy evil things that act cute is one of my favorite things.

Pepper - Seeing the minis always cooperate and help is super wholesome! They remind me of something I love, the Pikmins!

Flytee
Community Manager
353 comments
# 7   Posted: Jan 17 2022, 07:20 AM
Pepper- your comic was so warm and cosy, it was really neat seeing the use of dynamic, interesting angles in a non-action scene, It made for some very unique visuals.
I love you captured Art's mellow off-duty side. This was a lovely moment. Fantastic job!



Platinumartist
Approval Committee
177 comments
# 6   Posted: Jan 16 2022, 07:21 PM
Dang! These are some fun comics to read! You guys did great!

Flytee - I just Loved how you incorporated the Minis in your NDAverse by making them killer Fae which falls in line with how Fae's tend to be at times. Great job and I hope to see more of Art!

Pepper - OMG The Minis are so freakin' cute!!!! I can't stand it! Man the paneling was great and I hope to see more of the Mins in the near future!

Batty
Global Moderator
252 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 15 2022, 06:44 PM
Flytee: I love whatever brush you used on this, it's the perfect level of clean-yet-sketchy for these 24 hour comics! story-wise, I actually think I liked this round better than the last one. The buildup of horror was really nicely done, and the reveal of the monster-minis was adequately spoopy. Admittedly I'm not sure how I feel about the choice to make the Minis a malevolent force--it feels out of character in a way that the previous interpretations of characters haven't. That said, I understand why you made that choice and it paid off so -shrugs- Poor poor traumatized David tho XD

Pepper: Once again your sketches are so clear that I really don't mind that the lines are simply sketches! The splashes of color were a nice touch--the fact that you had enough time to do even a little color is really commendable! Unfortunately, though, I feel the story this time wasn't quite as poignant as last round. It felt a little... empty? It was certainly sweet and heartwarming but it didn't really hold any weight beyond that. With the previous round we got some really good introspection, but this one it was just a straightforward bit of cuteness.

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 15 2022, 06:40 PM
Flytee: ShowHide
Art continues to be Best Boy™️. Your writing of every character in this comic is superb; endearing, natural, adorable, full of character. I love how perfectly David fit into the role of interviewee for this tournament.

I don't want to repeat myself too much, so I'll just say that everything I loved about last round carries over into this round. I love that we've seen two different solutions to problems the NDA faces. Will we see a third option? I can't wait to find out!

Pepper: ShowHide
Short and cute! The first page had so many gorgeous angles and nice framing, although I think pages 2 and 3 kind of lost some of that. I think I would have preferred some backgrounds over the colors, but honestly you did this in less than a day and that's amazing :D

snager
Artist
415 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 14 2022, 12:18 PM
well, scoob, i'm dying to know [strike]what's inside[/strike] how Flytee would roast my characters when she imports them to the NDAverse

roast here meaning to razz, to critique with humor

Strawberry Pepper
Artist
24 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 14 2022, 12:37 AM
Reread and...
It hit me hard: duh the diamond was intentional. It worked into your transformation and 'monster' form XD

Poor David is sitting there, slightly traumatized.

Strawberry Pepper
Artist
24 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 14 2022, 12:07 AM
XD
Flytee, I have never seen someone have Mini so in character and out of character at the same time.
I know that you meant for there to be the ooc, so no worries there. X3 Just kinda wild how the more potentially horrifying/frustrating aspect of Minis are shifted to the fore where their actual nature is downplayed.
(one of the rules after all is 'mini can eat anything she perceives to be 'noms'... so yeah. I mean, you aren't wrong XD)
Somehow the return of the diamond mouth amuses me to no end.
Like, before it was more like a 'why does this keep happening?' sort of thing... But I get the vibe here that all the choices with what you did were mindful and intended. x3
Thanks for the fun battle. Hopefully we someday will be able to battle/collab some time under less strict circumstances.

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Regular Match
Drawing Time: 24 hours
Ended: Jan 15th, 2022
Votes Cast: 19
Page Views: 836
Winner: Flytee
 

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