First of all me, and my story (egocentrism is a common characteristic among artists):
I wanted to make it straight and yet vague fucked up dream story. I went with the aspect that my miller is true and he wants to wake up himself, but in the end it wasn't clear that they suppose to be married couple, and their past arguments were reoccuring in the jail of comma or their relationship. Now I see that unlike TODK's story mine feels disjonted and breaks the flow after almost every page, which could be explained by the estetic of dream, but we dream for that, not read comics.

TODK: I like it with lots of details and all those characters I don't really care about having feelings and thoughts. I can see you didn't manage to clean the scans fully, but it overally neat
I like almost all of the portrail of my character except one thing - you fixed his super broken nose :/ Without his hook for a nose he seems like a diffrent person

TODK - your stuff as always is fucking amazing. You already know what I think of it (needed more cleanup) but all in all its a fantastic comic. You do the best prison related stories dude.

Wolcik - There is some nice art here but then some real wonky stuff too. I wasn't really sure what happened through most of this comic. Still there is some clean art and nice drawings kicking around so keep at it.

good luck you two im excited

I'm a little behind due to moving ):

but what I have is good and I'll easily be able to finish on time

Miller.

MR AND MRS MILLER

EDIT - It's saturday and I've uploaded my battle. Can't wait to see what TODK has in store for me

MILLER INDEED

MILLER.