Mags vs. Harvey

Mags vs. Harvey

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PyrasTerran
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# 9   Posted: Feb 10 2017, 09:47 AM
Que cute! But it would have benefitted from another shade or two, I'm guessing you ran out of time

Don't disappear on us, hope to see more battles from you sooner rather than later

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 8   Posted: Feb 6 2017, 09:31 PM
ASTRO SEAN- Aw, dude. Whaaaaaat. :<

LOVE TANK- When I saw the first panel I got excited by your heavy inks and shadows, then was crestfallen that, that wasn't followed up in your following panels. Some heavy shadows on Harvey in his hovel really would've set the dreary tone I think you were tryin to convey from the start. As it stands, it just feels naked and kind of lacking as there's nothing much for the eye to fall on. Going from page to page feels even more bare, though your establishing shots like the alley they're speaking in look surprisingly out of place in their level of quality. I don't know how you work or split your workload, but this almost feels like bits of your comic were penned by an entirely other style.

Flutterbyes
Artist
299 comments
# 7   Posted: Feb 4 2017, 06:07 AM
Ah, that was a sweet, short comic. Cozy and simple!

The fill artifacts are a little distracting. Don't forget to expand your fills to minimize how much you'd need to touch up by hand. Depending on your program there may be an automatic setting.

Animeshen
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1490 comments
# 6   Posted: Feb 3 2017, 11:08 PM
this ends a little suddenly but it was cute! i liked the rendering of the docks in the first panel. mags is a sweetie and I love her cute design. Other than that not a whole lot happened but it was still a fun read.

love tank
Artist
10 comments
# 5   Posted: Feb 2 2017, 12:24 PM
No problem, Astro Sean. I know you spent a lot of time on it and I'm sorry you were prevented from uploading, but I'm glad you'll still put it on the site!

Sean
Artist
382 comments
# 4   Posted: Feb 1 2017, 07:37 AM
I wanna apologize to LOVE TANK about defaulting. My power went out last night due to an ice storm and I wasn't able to finish what needed to be done and upload. I'll be uploading the pages as a beyond battle this week. Sorry dude!

Hiemie
Artist
511 comments
# 3   Posted: Jan 12 2017, 12:54 PM
Finally, someone with sense enough in their head to fight Sean.

Sean
Artist
382 comments
# 2   Posted: Jan 12 2017, 11:54 AM
This is gonna be an explosive magic show

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 10 2017, 05:55 PM
Oh, oh, oh, its magic!

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Ended: Feb 7th, 2017
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