sorry I meant krat

This battle had potential, but I felt like I was pulling for it and then I was like, ugh crap.

M: can't be mad at you, again I guess technical difficulties, or something but still even the pages you had I really wanted something out of it; especially from the dialog. I wish you would do something a little darker and give it some extreme contrast and maybe just go all out dark for one or two battles. There is a range of you that I don't think you've tapped into yet with your ink washes and your dialog. With Suit I saw it coming out but just scratched the surface I know there is more emph and twists and great story telling you can do even with limited pages. You got it next time Bro.

Kral: it was cool, nothing much I can say about it. It just lacked really any depth other than your characters low self esteem and self anger. I just wish there were something your character was working towards that would really draw the reader in. Your art is great, just wish there was a story that wasn't so cut and dry really.

POOP! How'd I forget to upload two whole pages. . . . crap, man!

I can't start my computer due to a videocard issue so I don't have access to the Void FTP. Hopefully it'll be fixed in the next day or so, these things really shouldn't happen when I work all weekend. Because of this I can't do thumbnails.

yeah ditto, man. I did not finish. 2nd from the last page wasn't submitted but i hope u all grasp the sequence. Like Krat said it's something. .

Uploaded

Uploaded. Apologies for the last page. I had some difficulties in real life and in the process of making this, but I at least got something up.

of course when I get down to the wire, my net starts acting up.
conspiracy!

Oh yeah, that's fine. I've had to do a project for a printmaking class which took up a lot of time, so an extension is all right by me.

Hey Ill be without my sketchbook for two days so which I really need, so I'm going to extend for a couple extra days, but I'm not using the full week.

Sorry Krat.

Good luck guys, make sure to outdo each other.

Here we go! Can't wait to see what comes up.

So glad to be back in the battling pool, but man where the HECK am I going to go with this guy.

Thanks for taking interest Krat and I look forward to your story.