By the way, I'm really curious--what IS that character's nationality? Because if she's from certain countries, I could have totally just given you the wrong translations! O_O
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I agree about the backgrounds, it was my biggest complaint with myself. I did have significantly more background work done, but Sai ate about three days work of that and I was forced to regress to my final product here. Admittedly I am VERY guilty of negelecting my scenery, something I hope to do less of in the future. Seeing as how class is about to start I may roll into a Beyond Battle and flex those muscles there.
Nonetheless thanks for all the crits folks and thanks again for the battle elge, it was appreciated and fun even if you didn't get the product you wanted!
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Both really had similar issues in your comics, mainly lack of back grounds with just boring white hell even some more dramatic lines or experimenting with blacks would have sufficed. But when there is background it's just well boring. Story wise i was into both plus you guys got eachothers characters well. All and all not bad and like to see more.