As always dim your art and story were good, though your art was much better than your story
Tophat i fucking LOVE your writing, its smart and funny, i gave you high marks on your creativity and entertainment but i had to mark you lower than dim on quality, i cant wait to see how your stuff progresses man
Paolo Vernedi vs. The Luck Brothers
Critiques & Comments
# 28
Posted:
Oct 10 2006, 07:55 AM
# 27
Posted:
Oct 9 2006, 01:31 PM
Quick crits:
Dim: I always love the directness of your comics, but it coulda used some line variation and some more creativity.
TopHat: Nice story, but I would ditch the airbrushing and the lame font. Try a better comic font like one from Blambot.com. I think the Luck Brothers would be better in color too.
I calls \'em like I sees \'em! Kudos to both!
Dim: I always love the directness of your comics, but it coulda used some line variation and some more creativity.
TopHat: Nice story, but I would ditch the airbrushing and the lame font. Try a better comic font like one from Blambot.com. I think the Luck Brothers would be better in color too.
I calls \'em like I sees \'em! Kudos to both!
# 26
Posted:
Oct 9 2006, 01:19 PM
I never expected a comic on Void to use a word like \"succhiacazzo.\" Nice work, Dim. Your shit\'s hilarious as usual.
# 25
Posted:
Oct 9 2006, 06:57 AM
Dim, I\'m marrying your style
# 24
Posted:
Oct 7 2006, 10:58 AM
Dim: I enjoyed the comic but it was a bit too short and random. Very entertaining though!
TopHat: The art was good, but I think it would have been better if you had scanned it in at a slightly higher res. Storywise it was very cute, I enjoyed how the brothers interacted with Paolo.
My vote goes to TopHat for putting in more effort and I think it shows. :3
TopHat: The art was good, but I think it would have been better if you had scanned it in at a slightly higher res. Storywise it was very cute, I enjoyed how the brothers interacted with Paolo.
My vote goes to TopHat for putting in more effort and I think it shows. :3
# 23
Posted:
Oct 7 2006, 10:11 AM
Both battle is very stylish...
# 22
Posted:
Oct 7 2006, 09:03 AM
Dim - A perfect three pages. God you\'re amazing!! I would die if you were in armageddon <3
Silvertophat - A really solid effort, but your battle lost me in places. It would be cool if you could actually write out your text or make it larger, so its easier to read. <3
good job you guyss
Silvertophat - A really solid effort, but your battle lost me in places. It would be cool if you could actually write out your text or make it larger, so its easier to read. <3
good job you guyss
# 21
Posted:
Oct 7 2006, 01:52 AM
And shame on me for saying that. Hurr. Great ideas there.
# 20
Posted:
Oct 7 2006, 01:49 AM
Wheeeee, go Grim, goooo!
Shame on you for making Paolo sound like some sorta flavorless asshat, silver >:c
Shaaaaaame.
Shame on you for making Paolo sound like some sorta flavorless asshat, silver >:c
Shaaaaaame.
# 19
Posted:
Oct 6 2006, 07:06 PM
hahaha, oh god...TopHat, that was 100% distilled WIN in a bottle. Hysterical story, fantastic pacing, and kickin\' illustrations. Dude, I\'m not gonna lie, it will be a travesty if you don\'t come away with a victory.
P.S. The last panel made me snort some soda into my nose. It kind of burns, but it\'s a good sort of burn. haha
P.S. The last panel made me snort some soda into my nose. It kind of burns, but it\'s a good sort of burn. haha
# 18
Posted:
Oct 6 2006, 06:53 PM
Dim... I loved it. It didn\'t make a whole lot of sense, but I loved it never the less. The part with Riley laying out his plan to get more fish (accompanied by illustrations) had me cracking up. I think you should win just on basis of lovely arts and complete randomness. Loved it loved it looooooved it.
# 17
Posted:
Oct 6 2006, 05:27 PM
One or two more hours and we\'ll get to see how thouroughly I got my butt kicked in the story department. :p
# 16
Posted:
Oct 6 2006, 01:18 AM
It\'ll probably take a while for it to load and such.
# 15
Posted:
Oct 6 2006, 12:18 AM
Okay... I KNOW I submitted the appropriate pictures, why does it say overdue?
# 14
Posted:
Oct 5 2006, 11:40 PM
Sweeeet... More Paolo goodness. And I look forward to seeing the Luck Brothers, too. 20 min to finish... another day at least to see it... blah
# 13
Posted:
Oct 5 2006, 08:52 PM
i\'m waiting in anticipation
# 12
Posted:
Oct 5 2006, 06:42 PM
Phew, finished just in time. I hope this uploaded correctly. :/
Anyway, it ended up being a little long for the amount of pages we decided. I can\'t wait to see your comic Dim, I\'ve been dying to see the Luck bros done in your style. I hope I did justice to Paolo, he\'s one of my favorites, so I was afraid the whole time that I would mess him up.
Good luck!
Anyway, it ended up being a little long for the amount of pages we decided. I can\'t wait to see your comic Dim, I\'ve been dying to see the Luck bros done in your style. I hope I did justice to Paolo, he\'s one of my favorites, so I was afraid the whole time that I would mess him up.
Good luck!
# 11
Posted:
Oct 3 2006, 08:59 PM
Oh man. This is the last time I try taking on two battles at once. This is...this is pretty cracked-out. At least it\'s finished, though. :/
Good luck on your half, TopHat.
Good luck on your half, TopHat.
# 10
Posted:
Sep 27 2006, 10:54 PM
i hope paolo gets really angry
# 9
Posted:
Sep 19 2006, 07:27 PM
Tag-team match..........TAG TEAM MAAAAAAAAATCH!!!!
\"I mean, a dead person can\'t write a letter! Its illegal!\" ~James Sunderland
\"I mean, a dead person can\'t write a letter! Its illegal!\" ~James Sunderland
# 8
Posted:
Sep 16 2006, 02:44 PM
lol, it could very well go the other way around. I\'ve been waiting for a long time to try my hand at drawing the Luck Bros.
# 7
Posted:
Sep 16 2006, 02:06 PM
This is going to be such a great fight. Dim, I must say, it will be an honor to lose to you.
# 6
Posted:
Sep 15 2006, 09:33 PM
Dude, you did? Eep! I\'m sorry! I haven\'t checked my yahoo account since I moved into my dorm.
Sorry dude.
Sorry dude.
# 5
Posted:
Sep 15 2006, 06:56 PM
D\'oh! Dim! I sent you a challenge a few weeks ago, but you never accepted! Boohoohoo. Oh well, I\'ll challenge someone else instead soon, okay? This should be a good match anyway.
# 4
Posted:
Sep 15 2006, 01:19 PM
dimm I love you and you know that, but luck brothers are also my favorite, so AHHH TOUGH CHOICE!!!!!
GOOD LUCK!!!!!! T__T
GOOD LUCK!!!!!! T__T
# 3
Posted:
Sep 14 2006, 11:21 PM
Dim-Amentia<3
# 2
Posted:
Sep 14 2006, 08:47 PM
Paolo is 200% concentrated man in a can. Therefore, he is perfectly capable of taking on both Luck Bros. at the same time...unless they cheat and do something mean like hit below the belt or pull a gun on him. Then he\'ll lose. Definitely.
# 1
Posted:
Sep 14 2006, 08:35 PM
It\'s a two on one fight? How is that fair?
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Oct 13th, 2006
Votes Cast:
53
Page Views:
1875
Winner:
DimAmentia
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