Koshi vs. Todd Boggart
Critiques & Comments
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91 comments
# 21
Posted:
Jul 27 2010, 12:31 PM
Great job you two; they both were excellent reads!
# 20
Posted:
Jul 24 2010, 03:00 PM
Dustin it's really awesome to see a fully colored comic with more than 4 pages. This is really impressive and though I haven't been on this site for too too long, I dare say this is my favorite overall comic I've seen so far. Moreover, while I know humor is an amazing tool in writing and almost a necessity, I'm a sucker for a little character-developing drama, so you scored some major brownie points (pickup only, no delivery) with me for showing that Koshi does have a little vulnerability.
Wiggen your art is really good. You do a good job of using different angles to keep the story interesting and entertaining. Variety is the spice of life (pretty sure I quoted that right) and you use it to beautiful effect. It would be nice to see this finished, yes, but that aside I have to agree that you wrote the characters very well and it was a fun and entertaining thing to see their personalities bounce off of each other like this.
Great job, both of you, really well done.
Wiggen your art is really good. You do a good job of using different angles to keep the story interesting and entertaining. Variety is the spice of life (pretty sure I quoted that right) and you use it to beautiful effect. It would be nice to see this finished, yes, but that aside I have to agree that you wrote the characters very well and it was a fun and entertaining thing to see their personalities bounce off of each other like this.
Great job, both of you, really well done.
# 19
Posted:
Jul 23 2010, 08:16 PM
Okay okay. I'm home now. Dustin, that comic was epic and I love you. The story was hilarious. The art was great. You also trounced me completely. Damn you for being unemployed. Curses for a fifty hour work week.
No I'm just kidding. You're the greatest.
No I'm just kidding. You're the greatest.
# 18
Posted:
Jul 23 2010, 08:19 AM
hahaha! Wiggen i LOVE your comic! this is a great interaction with the two characters, and you captured koshi perfectly.
i understand that work can get in the way of the comic making process, but looking past sketchiness, i can totally see a great style here.
the only reason i was able to color mine was because i'm unemployed right now, lol.
Good luck to you man!~
i understand that work can get in the way of the comic making process, but looking past sketchiness, i can totally see a great style here.
the only reason i was able to color mine was because i'm unemployed right now, lol.
Good luck to you man!~
# 17
Posted:
Jul 23 2010, 05:57 AM
Hot damn that looks awesome... I'll actually read it when I get back from work
# 16
Posted:
Jul 23 2010, 02:14 AM
Dustin C. - It's awesome. I don't have any real critique, cause I find this A+ work - next time I'll be making a battle I might look at yours for clues.
Wiggen - if you just cleaned the lines it would look complete, e.g. if on 5th page youd erase the guilde lines on top, those panels would look good to go
Wiggen - if you just cleaned the lines it would look complete, e.g. if on 5th page youd erase the guilde lines on top, those panels would look good to go
# 15
Posted:
Jul 23 2010, 01:46 AM
Awesome comic Dustin, I really enjoyed it and it was nicely coloured all the way through. The story was rather entertaining as well
Wiggen, it would have been cool to see it finished! It was a neat idea, though sometimes I found it hard to follow
Wiggen, it would have been cool to see it finished! It was a neat idea, though sometimes I found it hard to follow
# 14
Posted:
Jul 22 2010, 09:24 PM
TODAY I TRULY EARNED MY CLASS C
Also, it is uploaded. Sleep is imminent.
Also, it is uploaded. Sleep is imminent.
# 13
Posted:
Jul 22 2010, 09:00 PM
uploaded!
# 12
Posted:
Jul 22 2010, 07:00 PM
Just got back from work. Will also submit in a couple hours. (11 hour shifts. Meh.)
# 11
Posted:
Jul 22 2010, 05:18 PM
It's almost time! I'll be submitting in a few hours
# 10
Posted:
Jul 20 2010, 07:05 AM
Can't wait for this battle!
# 9
Posted:
Jul 10 2010, 10:45 PM
lets rock this!!! X0
# 8
Posted:
Jul 10 2010, 02:34 PM
As I was also considering an extension... no. No I do not mind.
# 7
Posted:
Jul 10 2010, 01:12 PM
Hey Wiggen hope you dont mind but....Extension time!!
# 6
Posted:
Jul 2 2010, 05:46 PM
MAROONE!....
wait...
i'll try my best to make this my best yet!
wait...
i'll try my best to make this my best yet!
# 5
Posted:
Jul 2 2010, 11:04 AM
Awesome match up!
# 4
Posted:
Jul 2 2010, 08:27 AM
Looking foward to it!
# 3
Posted:
Jul 2 2010, 05:07 AM
G-G-G-G-GHOOOSTS!! D:
# 2
Posted:
Jul 1 2010, 10:19 PM
This feels right somehow.
# 1
Posted:
Jul 1 2010, 09:34 PM
WHO YOU GONNA CALL
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks + 1
Ended:
Jul 29th, 2010
Votes Cast:
30
Page Views:
2156
Winner:
Dustin C.
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