Q: I could barely see this. I know that my monitor is a little dark, so I\'m aware that that could be the problem.. but I don\'t think it would have hurt if you\'d made the greys lighter and/or added some lights to bring the figures out. But aside from that, you got me interested in the story with the four pages you have; wish you\'d finished etc. etc.
dawgmastas: Really like your colors.. everything is very neat and clear... About your hatching though, something I\'ve learned is that cross-hatching at 90 degree angles all the time makes objects look inorganic. If you follow contours of the figure or object instead, such as when hatching people (and furries), it will look much more natural.
Your story was interesting if confusing sometimes... mostly \'cause I\'m not up-to-date about Jingles\' story. Is that robot TLBot? He looks like TL, but the fact that he\'s green is throwing me off..
Athos vs. Jingles
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# 11
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Dec 28 2007, 04:20 PM
# 10
Posted:
Dec 28 2007, 10:29 AM
qtrnevermore: hahaaaww i really wished you would have finishd this, when i saw Marcelo, my heart jumped XD i\'m lovin\' your style, it\'s different, like when you put those small details in the chars faces like in the first panel of page 1 and 4 ( both my favorite panels, which i\'m currently enojying starring at right now XD ) as for the read, it ran pretty smoothly =]
dawgmastas: shit, i just loves the colors you use, they\'re soft and not too intense <3 i like that scratchy look too, like when you put random lines to give some texture ( you DO do that on purpose, right? o.o ) page 6 gave me a giggle, i really wasn\'t excpecting that haha everything ran smoothly too, with no interuptions or anything ( excpect for my internet connection, but that doesn\'t count... >_> )
dawgmastas: shit, i just loves the colors you use, they\'re soft and not too intense <3 i like that scratchy look too, like when you put random lines to give some texture ( you DO do that on purpose, right? o.o ) page 6 gave me a giggle, i really wasn\'t excpecting that haha everything ran smoothly too, with no interuptions or anything ( excpect for my internet connection, but that doesn\'t count... >_> )
# 9
Posted:
Dec 25 2007, 07:42 PM
uploaded. holiday madness.. did what i could... but my character boring me at this point. sigh.
# 8
Posted:
Dec 24 2007, 04:46 PM
Just got done uploading
# 7
Posted:
Dec 17 2007, 09:25 PM
expect this present without wrapping paper. i hope i get time off work before its too late.
# 6
Posted:
Dec 17 2007, 03:21 PM
Oh yeah. I should get started on this :3
# 5
Posted:
Dec 14 2007, 09:46 PM
You\'ve got to admit, this is a weird match up. :\'D
At any rate, I think it\'ll be an interesting story, to say the least. Go dawg and gtr! For the yuletide!
At any rate, I think it\'ll be an interesting story, to say the least. Go dawg and gtr! For the yuletide!
# 4
Posted:
Nov 27 2007, 06:36 PM
haha..i had no idea this would land on x-mas. ... lets not sing jingle bells please.
# 3
Posted:
Nov 27 2007, 01:35 PM
You\'re making Wei work at x-mas >:
# 2
Posted:
Nov 27 2007, 12:19 PM
MERRY CHRISTMAS, EVERYONE.
# 1
Posted:
Nov 27 2007, 12:16 PM
A Festivus for the rest of us.
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jingles makes me happy though. lovely colors dawg, keep your storying going I want to know where he ends up next!