enterVOID Holiday Comic:Summer Camp Adventure 2017
Critiques & Comments
# 14
Posted:
Sep 18 2017, 10:02 PM
This was the first collab comic I have seen here since I recently joined and it was a very fun experience to read through all of it. good job everyone who worked on it.
# 13
Posted:
Sep 18 2017, 08:50 AM
Damn, this summer was a hot one...
# 12
Posted:
Sep 17 2017, 11:17 AM
Another fantastic collab!!
So many of these comics were incredibly charming and funny. It's always a lot of fun to be a part of these things and draw alongside you guys.
I appreciate everyone's hard work, it was a genuine pleasure to read!
So many of these comics were incredibly charming and funny. It's always a lot of fun to be a part of these things and draw alongside you guys.
I appreciate everyone's hard work, it was a genuine pleasure to read!
# 11
Posted:
Sep 15 2017, 07:33 PM
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
i'll freely admit i know very little about anything! but i'm still gonna do critiques
i'll freely admit i know very little about anything! but i'm still gonna do critiques
# 10
Posted:
Sep 15 2017, 07:04 PM
Reecer6:
1. Thoooooor maaaaaan you're not seriously redoing ALL of the lines for IDENTICAL CONSECUTIVE PANELS, are you??? If the dude's in the exact same position in the same spot in the same angle, you can just copy and paste it! It doesn't look lazy at all! No one's going to notice it, except for me because it's a thing I consciously and pointlessly check, but most people don't do that! Pleeaaase, your stuff is really nice and detailed, don't have to go through those details again and again and again when it's not necessary.
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# 9
Posted:
Sep 15 2017, 05:36 PM
@ Reccer: I'm.....not sure which point you're referring to. There's not much that's actually identical because things progress and move. I don't quite understand this critique because copy/paste isn't much of a benefit other than a minor amount of time gained, and time is not something I struggle with. So I'm honestly very confused.
# 8
Posted:
Sep 15 2017, 05:21 PM
PyrasTerran: 1. I think Thor doing that is something to be admired actually, there's a stylistic movement given to this kind of re-drawing shots that you don't get with copy/paste
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# 7
Posted:
Sep 15 2017, 01:18 PM
1. I think Thor doing that is something to be admired actually, there's a stylistic movement given to this kind of re-drawing shots that you don't get with copy/paste
2. Arena's relationships crash and burn with the rising and falling of the sun, that's the point~
2. Arena's relationships crash and burn with the rising and falling of the sun, that's the point~
# 6
Posted:
Sep 15 2017, 01:15 PM
Super excellent, as always! Through all that, I have like, two things to comment about.
1. Thoooooor maaaaaan you're not seriously redoing ALL of the lines for IDENTICAL CONSECUTIVE PANELS, are you??? If the dude's in the exact same position in the same spot in the same angle, you can just copy and paste it! It doesn't look lazy at all! No one's going to notice it, except for me because it's a thing I consciously and pointlessly check, but most people don't do that! Pleeaaase, your stuff is really nice and detailed, don't have to go through those details again and again and again when it's not necessary.
2. So, I might have forgot... Crikey and Arena... ever even met before? Shen mentioned in the Discord that their ship "blew up", but I just assumed that was a joke, that they met for the first time ever in this collab and they got super mad at each other, and there was some sort of in-joke there I missed. But, uh, no, here they are, and here they aren't anymore. This was something in the V-day collab, right? I feel like a single comic thread amongst like thirty other comic threads to start a relationship, no mention of it for six months, and then another single comic thread amongst like thirty other comic threads with their breakup is a bit very rushed for a plotline to be paced.
1. Thoooooor maaaaaan you're not seriously redoing ALL of the lines for IDENTICAL CONSECUTIVE PANELS, are you??? If the dude's in the exact same position in the same spot in the same angle, you can just copy and paste it! It doesn't look lazy at all! No one's going to notice it, except for me because it's a thing I consciously and pointlessly check, but most people don't do that! Pleeaaase, your stuff is really nice and detailed, don't have to go through those details again and again and again when it's not necessary.
2. So, I might have forgot... Crikey and Arena... ever even met before? Shen mentioned in the Discord that their ship "blew up", but I just assumed that was a joke, that they met for the first time ever in this collab and they got super mad at each other, and there was some sort of in-joke there I missed. But, uh, no, here they are, and here they aren't anymore. This was something in the V-day collab, right? I feel like a single comic thread amongst like thirty other comic threads to start a relationship, no mention of it for six months, and then another single comic thread amongst like thirty other comic threads with their breakup is a bit very rushed for a plotline to be paced.
# 5
Posted:
Sep 14 2017, 03:48 AM
phenomenal artwork guys! great interactions, a lot of cute and fun stories, very lighthearted! maybe kind of a surplus on NPCs and a dearth of cameos compares to other parties, everyone just kinda did their own thing but still got some rad comics! Hats, all your scenes were so gorgeous they blew my mind! Fu, everything you coloured came out amazing! tay your backgrounds were breathtaking! (OMG! Henshin Tsumi!!) Sand i LOVED your Crawford timelapse and his abuse of Adwell, who speaking of which, sure seems like a suggestible guy, Alouisse XD Kura your Nightingale solution was SO CREATIVE, what a fantastic way to clean up her story so you can use her again! Everyone did great work! It was a lot of fun you guys!
# 4
Posted:
Sep 13 2017, 10:22 PM
Amazing work guys! 90 % less genitalia than the Vday collab byt 110 % wilderness
# 3
Posted:
Sep 13 2017, 07:23 PM
Thanks Taylor, for cameoing Veronica. She was literally impossible to use in this without any context.
# 2
Posted:
Sep 13 2017, 12:12 AM
This was a blast to be a part of!
# 1
Posted:
Sep 12 2017, 10:20 PM
Congrats to everyone who finished for me the fishing comic of Jacksters took the cake for me! it was overall amazing.
Sparring Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Sep 19th, 2017
Votes Cast:
11
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2660
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