Well I don't normally post this kinda stuff to Void, but hey, first time for everything and I could use some real feedback <3
Sooo I'm busting out a new style for a webcomic I'm makin' and I wanted some feed back on some of the main characters and base plot~
The title is LovE Me DeaD (got it from a song by Ludo lol)
This is Creed Lovan, he was recently murdered, but thanks to some stupid kids messing around with a book of evil rituals and weakening the Veil near his grave he was able to come back as a Revenant (sort of an upgrade from just a "zombie"). Now he's back and out for revenge...but there's a few problems. One; it seems forcing one's soul out of Hell is a bit traumatizing and causes rather severe memory loss. Two; whatever the two kids did to open a hole in the Veil seems to have killed one kid and bound Creed to the other one when he broke through.
As Creed would say
"Shit."I still have to finish coloring the other main character (I have to get up eaaarly so I'll post him and his little description tomorrow).
Questions, comments, concerns?