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GO FOR BROKE! / Re: Rice and Sugar
« on: Nov 10, 2013, 10:34 PM »
I think these are looking great! I'm digging your painting technique. It looks like you're using some pretty bold/confident strokes. Your stylized stuff is looking good and I like that you're playing around with the perspective shots.
In the second image, the one with girl in the dress, the perspective doesn't really add up. It's as if the torso and head where drawn on one plane and the pelvis and legs another and that causes a distorted effect and makes her seem off balance.
Your proportions seem to be little off and it looks to be with the legs mainly. Like, in the X-23 piece her legs are too small and they seemed pinched. I think the head is too big, also.
I would like to see a little more variety in your line and some overlap and not strictly outlines. Do keep up the anatomy studies. Watch the squash and stretch of the human body. The third image makes appears as if the girl has some sort of wooden club for legs. They wouldn't be that firm, there would be a little more sag in the ass and they would be flatter where they touch the ground.
In the second image, the one with girl in the dress, the perspective doesn't really add up. It's as if the torso and head where drawn on one plane and the pelvis and legs another and that causes a distorted effect and makes her seem off balance.
Your proportions seem to be little off and it looks to be with the legs mainly. Like, in the X-23 piece her legs are too small and they seemed pinched. I think the head is too big, also.
I would like to see a little more variety in your line and some overlap and not strictly outlines. Do keep up the anatomy studies. Watch the squash and stretch of the human body. The third image makes appears as if the girl has some sort of wooden club for legs. They wouldn't be that firm, there would be a little more sag in the ass and they would be flatter where they touch the ground.