Nice stuff, Mr.noitaul. I love the story. getting a lot better with the composition and Inks are nice. Keep it up homie.
♫HOLLA!♫

for a sec there I thought you were back Anonymooo =/
been a while since ive seen your stuff

next time perhaps

Your figures are pretty good. Your backgrounds still need work, don't be afraidto throw down a grid perspective to get it right. You need to find a better way of doing hair as well. you are drawing most of the strands which makes it look scratchy. I believe Cold drew that cover? On the cover the hais isn't scratched out it's been stylized, I would just look at how a lot of other artists handle hair and approximate a cleaner way of doing so. I really enjoyed the story too.

Good stuff Corry! Should have colored this one... you didn't have your washes, and it would have worked well with the blood at the end!!

Lot of potential here, Mrnoitaull. You can draw. I'd like to see some passion in your work though. Very technically sound, but seems to lack a playful and/or enthusiastic approach. Have some fun with it! Don't be afraid to cut lose and experiment with some wild poses, angles, or exaggerations. Backgrounds could use some work, but not a big deal in this entry. I found it to be easily followed and understood, which is always essential in it's entertainment value. The only other thing I see would be that your work seems to lack definition to be b/w. Coloring this entry would have done wonders for it considering the style of your crisp and clean lines.

Mrnoitall, what the hell did you do?  Giant leap in skill here, im really liking what i see.  Great anatomy, awesome perspective shots, and really slick inking.  The story kinda dragged on so i see why you could have fizzled out at the end, but I was still thoroughly entertained so thumbs up!  Everything here is awesome, my only main point of critique is spend a little more time with your BG's, for example,those trees early on look really fake, a little referencewould help bring more reality to the scene.  I'm looking forward to seeing what you do next!

Mooo, sorry buddy?

yeah I'm in FINALLY.

I def had to push the last couple out, so yeah my bad.
Lost steam.

Make em' fresh!!!!

AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YEAAAAHHHH

Now we have another week!  Another week for me to give this thing a good conclusion, and another week for Mrnoitaull's scanner to stop being a punk.

Holy crap!  Mooo's back?!  Can't wait to see it man!

My scanner sucks too.  But that's okay, this'll be fun.

MY SCANNER SUCKS!

that's all.

DANG IT NATE!!! Now i gotta do it too....xP

light 'em up moo!!!

YEAH!!! MOOO!!!
Welcome back man! and good luck to you too Corry.
Should be a good fight.

Good to see you back Moo! Good luck both of you

Nate, please tell me you have something good planned for this, you gotta set an example for all the new folks who will be coming in really soon!

And then...


Mooo happened.

Good Luck, guys.