Slaggle             -

               OHMYGODWHAT. UGH DUDE. SO GOOD. Seriously this is so pretty and well drawn and the colours and ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. What a beautiful comic! I can't believe you would say it's shit, cause this is amazing. All those beautiful colours and confident lines, and amazing, well thought out settings. I love the collection of stuff behind Ink Princess. Even the style of furniture tells a story about who she is and what her life is like.

            Only thing I can suggest is to have your characters stand out a little more from the world, either through colour choices or general tone/saturation of the figure. Linsey stands out well because she's such a dark figure against the bright, saturated bar, but everyone else could use some help.

           Also, are those circles around Linsey supposed to be like drunk effects? Those should stand out a little bit more too, they recede way too much after the first page. And I really don't think your text stuff and speech bubbles fit super well, but I'm really awful at that stuff, so I can't help :I


GPS         -

         Ugggggghhh goddamnit dude, those first 2 pages. You've gotten so much better it's crazy. Your proportions and construction are so much stronger. And look at that hand on page 1. LOOK AT IT. Not only is well drawn and solid, but you can feel her mood through the way she grips the gun. You broke my heart into a thousand pieces when all that beautiful ink work disappeared.

           Have you though about using a brush with expressive opacity when you're doing you're sketches/roughs? If your process is totally working you it doesn't matter, but it might help you keep your stuff more legible until your final inks. Whatever works for you though dude, you're definitely making amazing stuff with what you're doing.

Slagglle! So lovely is your art. Great seeing the Bartender again, and of course we've all missed Ms. Pescion. I like your use of color, especially in the bar--the lighting in Lindsey's hair for example is nicely done. I think the next think to try for in your future comics is taking the lovely painterly colors and adding some depth/gradient to them. They are nice as is, but also each block of color is the same value throughout. Adding some shades, some depth to the color areas might push this even further! All in all, good show! You've come so far I'm always glad to see how you'll reinvent your style next!

Also I nominate Page 3 for Perspective of the Year

GPS! This started off nicely--I think you've improved so much sine coming to VOID. Like, really! The first few pages are probably my favorite pages of yours just in terms of overall completeness--the figure work, the environment/backgrounds, all really cool. Be careful with the text boxes that the text doesn't slam up against walls or look to cramped, however. That said, please continue on your current trajectory good sir. I hope to see the next GPS comic finished!

ahhh slaggle your art is so pretty I wish there was more of this comic! it just sort of stops! T.T that perspective shot of the city on page 4, i was JUST trying to ink a shot like that and now I feel like an ass because yours is so awesome lol!
Geeps I know you were mega busy this week with tests and stuff so I can forgive the end of the comic because you did turn in an entire, legible story. The first couple pages were great though, your greyscale looks really nice and good perspective. Im sad ink princess is dead because she seems so interesting =(

Submitted. Sorry it's such shit GPS.

Submitted what I've got. Did everything I could, but I've got school and work tomorrow, so I just want to make sure that what I could get finished makes it online.

I'm gonna be cutting it close on this one, but life be dammed I will have something pretty to show for it!

Yes Ink Princess goooooooooooo!

ooooh can't wait to see this battle! Good luck you two!