Barra Arisa vs. dorian
Critiques & Comments
# 30
why does phillip die? Euro comics are a damn good alternative =P
# 29
Please love me ;_;
# 28
what did I do to deserve double hate?! Ok then lune, no sharing pizza with you ever again! Bitch ;P
# 27
Okay, lets not get riled up kiddies- like Gabe here said. Bai, I'm so proud of you. It's really awsome to see you finish comic pages and kick ass doing it! You know as a person who loves you very much, it's a pain in the ass to give critiques, so this time around I will subside in that department cause I know this is your first go. Mickey, I love your style, it's sometimes a lil overexagerating- but awsome. I didn't quite get what happaned- This is kinda an even match for me, so great work to the both of you-- and phillip, I hate you.
# 26
Okay, lets not get riled up kiddies- like Gabe here said. Bai, I'm so proud of you. It's really awsome to see you finish comic pages and kick ass doing it! You know as a person who loves you very much, it's a pain in the ass to give critiques, so this time around I will subside in that department cause I know this is your first go. Mickey, I love your style, it's sometimes a lil overexagerating- but awsome. I didn't quite get what happaned- This is kinda an even match for me, so great work to the both of you-- and phillip, I hate you.
# 25
HAHAHAHAHAH.....Tit Muncher!!!!
# 24
This one is pretty even for me...
Barra: Pretty good for a first comic, but you should consider adding more to your fights from this point on. Consider comics that work on Barra's personality, make her a believable character that we can actually care about! Beyond battles would be right up your alley, and if you want to ditch anime... take shorty's advice and look at some euro comics! Hell, look at any comic and get some good design ideas! Anywho, enough of that, the comic was dry you could say... I thought the first part was going somewhere... but then it died on us! DEATH SURROUNDS US!! But you get the point...
Mickey: Also a dry comic... but in all honesty, I liked your art better so my vote is for you! Give us more next time ya foo!
Anywho, pretty much equal vote for me... keep it up or something?
Barra: Pretty good for a first comic, but you should consider adding more to your fights from this point on. Consider comics that work on Barra's personality, make her a believable character that we can actually care about! Beyond battles would be right up your alley, and if you want to ditch anime... take shorty's advice and look at some euro comics! Hell, look at any comic and get some good design ideas! Anywho, enough of that, the comic was dry you could say... I thought the first part was going somewhere... but then it died on us! DEATH SURROUNDS US!! But you get the point...
Mickey: Also a dry comic... but in all honesty, I liked your art better so my vote is for you! Give us more next time ya foo!
Anywho, pretty much equal vote for me... keep it up or something?
# 23
This comic is the first one that i have ever actualy completed. Im pretty new to the comic seen and I need alot of critique and help. Just try to be gentle okay? I really am sick of drawing anime, sence ive been doing it sence I was twelve but I need time to try and develope a new style that is unique to me.. And micky, you did great. I personaly think you kicked my ass.
# 22
holy god.
i think these kids are taking this shit too seriously.
can we PLEASE NOT COSPLAY IN THE COMMENTS SECTION?!?!?
MICKEY I LOVED IT. TONES + COLOR IS GOD.
BARRA - YOU DID GREAT. FEW MORE BATTLES AND YOU SHOULD BE A TOP PLAYER
i think these kids are taking this shit too seriously.
can we PLEASE NOT COSPLAY IN THE COMMENTS SECTION?!?!?
MICKEY I LOVED IT. TONES + COLOR IS GOD.
BARRA - YOU DID GREAT. FEW MORE BATTLES AND YOU SHOULD BE A TOP PLAYER
# 21
Mickey- Beautiful tones, and great mood. It seemed so short to me though =( Dorian is a hot item no doubt.
Barra- Cute... its so generic though. The way you portrayed Dorian was terrible. He looked like he was a whiny 5 year old. The japanese sound effects were tacky.. this is an english site? I know that some people have liked the vivid colors and what not, but they're so standard. There is no mood to your scene. Good first fight though. You have potential for better work
Mickey wins it for me.
Barra- Cute... its so generic though. The way you portrayed Dorian was terrible. He looked like he was a whiny 5 year old. The japanese sound effects were tacky.. this is an english site? I know that some people have liked the vivid colors and what not, but they're so standard. There is no mood to your scene. Good first fight though. You have potential for better work
Mickey wins it for me.
# 20
i like them both. but i go with the vivid colors from Barra
# 19
And that AbbysalDrow guy : ......what ?
# 18
Barra : Decent lines, good colors. Backgrounds need work though, you should probably be drawing it all out by hand. To be honest I was expecting screentones for this fight like in your intro. The way you drew Dorian makes him look kinda kiddish, almost like Jet from Wild Arms 3. The script looks like it was written for anyone to have been tossed in there, and there really was no actual fight so there's no point of interest. I see PLENTY of room for improvement and LOTS of potential to improve. Keep it up.
Dorian : Woooo~ Violent Kei cameo ! I felt this fight coulda been taken to another page or so, I was hoping to see more action from Dorian than just KICK (though it was a damn epic KICK), but you're still trucking it artwise (coulda been better, but meh) and you've really dropped a sense of Dorian's slickness in this fight. Good work.
Dorian : Woooo~ Violent Kei cameo ! I felt this fight coulda been taken to another page or so, I was hoping to see more action from Dorian than just KICK (though it was a damn epic KICK), but you're still trucking it artwise (coulda been better, but meh) and you've really dropped a sense of Dorian's slickness in this fight. Good work.
# 17
Someone get that 'AbyssalDrow' kid a helmet and some padding....cause im'a bout to beat the shit out of him...
...ARISA: your fight...wasn't so much a fight. Unexciting, anti-climatic...and pretty dull. Not a fan of the style so i'm naturally biased, but the backgrounds seemed very stock-standard...done with automatic brushes and the like....and the whole translation of japanese sound effects just looked wanky... use english jenkins.
...MICKEY: totally not your best...but hot all the same. I was expecting dorian to be a tad clonish of dumas, but proved me wrong mick, PROVED ME WRONG!! He's one suave mother and i like it...
P.S. Im'a write youa poem one day.
...ARISA: your fight...wasn't so much a fight. Unexciting, anti-climatic...and pretty dull. Not a fan of the style so i'm naturally biased, but the backgrounds seemed very stock-standard...done with automatic brushes and the like....and the whole translation of japanese sound effects just looked wanky... use english jenkins.
...MICKEY: totally not your best...but hot all the same. I was expecting dorian to be a tad clonish of dumas, but proved me wrong mick, PROVED ME WRONG!! He's one suave mother and i like it...
P.S. Im'a write youa poem one day.
# 16
christ doing cartwheels, youre a fucking FREAK
# 15
w...t....f...
freakin da kids
freakin da kids
# 14
O_o
storywise... both fights lacked, i found both not funny at all.
art wise, mikey takes it, she plays those tones like a piano.
entertainment... i guess...mickey, just because she has a liver market XD
storywise... both fights lacked, i found both not funny at all.
art wise, mikey takes it, she plays those tones like a piano.
entertainment... i guess...mickey, just because she has a liver market XD
# 13
Mickey... that is the most epic kick... I have ever seen.... EVER
# 12
That's right .. fight my piggies, FIGHT!! I gots my eye on you Barra.. have since Dev Art. Don't be letting me down now!!
# 11
hey imma comment on this vote, Barra im not sure if u got my mail but i mailed ya, it dont really matter too much now, ill see your fighting style in this battle...i hope. But you should post it up somewhere, like in your bio or something. Good luck to both artists!
# 10
heh... Thought so... But hey, I like it.
# 9
no, it's dorian black!!! i just now decided.
but dorian is super obviously based on 'the picture of dorian gray', if that was your question?
but dorian is super obviously based on 'the picture of dorian gray', if that was your question?
# 8
Oh snap, this should be good. Though a quick question to Mickey... Dorian's last name wouldn't by any chance happen to be Gray, would it?
# 7
harharhar. boobies.
# 6
show us what you've got arisa~
and mickey... heh, it's about time
and mickey... heh, it's about time
# 5
omg DORIAN YES!!! I am all kinds of happyyyyy
# 4
Fuckballs yes. Wipe Micky's nose clean my moosey! You two give a good fight!!
# 3
DOO~~RIIAAA~~N !! O_O;;
# 2
Alright! We finaly get to see Dorian in a fight! Good luck you two.
# 1
I think this will be a good fight. I actually wanted to fight both of yall but that will come later. Good luck to you both I expect hot shit from u 2
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Oct 4th, 2004
Votes Cast:
38
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1700
Winner:
mickey
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