Feel free to do away with this thread if it's considered double-posting (my original thread is locked) Here it is for reference: http://entervoid.com/index.php?topic=11543.0 (and excuse how freakin' blabby I was back then...I was young. haha)

I feel like I need to re-introduce Sherry, since it's been FOREVER since I've been on here. I have also made slight changes that may need a look-over? I also want to see if the changes may warrant new intro pages as well.

Anyways. Here's Sherry Pride/Shryxa 2.0! (or 2.5?)


And the new bio:
Det. Sherry Pride is an outstanding head detective of the VCPD. She gets the job done efficiently and effectively. Currently she and her team are investigating the brutal murders of top class criminals. What the VCPD doesn't know is that Sherry is the one responsible for these murders, because every time she attempts to detain them, she accidentally kills them with her alien powers.

Behind her human mask, she is Shryxa, a 9ft tall alien from outer space. The police badge she carries with her is actually alien technology that traps her into a human form. The device is indestructible and she cannot stay away from it too long for it drains her life-force. She also owns a desert eagle, which she can wield because of her alien strength.

Her personality is very spunky and tomboyish, and can have a bit of dark humor on the side as well.


Here are my intro pages as well (WARNING: They're old. (and yes, a spelling error is on the first page) Also I need more critique on whether the slight story changes will still work with these pages. I already got the critique on my artwork and panels on my previous thread!)





Come at me bros with your critiques!