Vehemence-
This is a lot better then your last match when it comes to quality, action and creativity.
I like comics where Asian Bloke isn\'t fully beaten and actually makes friends in a weird way. You got differences in characters faces nailed down pretty well. Your focus on the action was also enjoyable and you got AB\'s character quite right in just three panels. It was a good read and i liked the story, but those fonts man...get some at blambot.com or at least cap, bold or italic em. But you had limited resources...understandable, i\'m almost jealous, i love backpacking.
Keep at it, i hope your next match will be within less then 2 years.
Welcome back!

Gee-
Dispite the fact you didn\'t inlude a last page..the humor and ending is what reminds me of what Void used to be in the beginning. Short, simple and fun.
I really dig your rapid improvent of skill, especially in pencils. The dynamics and facial expressions are so fukking vivid and entertaining...and i\'ve learned a new word. the \"Loo\".
Wether it\'s 10 pages or three, you always seem to nail down an amusing story. I particularly like it where this one is told from Bane\'s perspective.
But hey, i understand why you didn\'t finish the rest. I hope shit gets better real soon. And like last monday you can always talk to me, i don\'t care if you want to swear and rant. I\"m there dude.

Keep on keeping on guys!

ImaGEEnat!on, I\'m sorry to hear about your situation.  That\'s total crap, man =/.  But like JT\'s sung recently, \"What Goes Around Comes Around\".  She\'ll get hers.

Despite that, what you did put out was pretty good, still.  Good anatomy, decent background use - it could use a bit of touching up with plot and dialogue, but it was aiight!  Best of luck with things!

Vehemence, I think you need to focus on a few things to sharpen your battles:

*cleaning up your pencils - perhaps some inks to sharpen it all, because it looks a bit jumbled and muddy
*anatomy - for instance, the bouncer dude at the beginning has no neck at all
*INVEST IN BETTER FONTS.  You can find them for free on the Internet, man.  Standard Windows fonts just don\'t cut it!
*flow/storytelling: the transition of the panels and the action in general was quite confusing

Keep at it!

WOW... nice work dude. very impressed. I have to agree, your style is awesome and i think this is one of your best comics yet. nice work dude.

I liked it, we have both serious and comedical situations in the same fight, quite unique. Vehemence\'s only fault is that the beggining is a bit confusing, but is ok. I also think that it a very \"jumped\", since your guy was being beaten, and suddenly wins the fight.

As for Imageenation, it rocked. I\'m most impressed about the advance of the drawings since the last ones. I dig the style! Too bad you didn\'t finished it, but the last page is owning enough =P

Good luck for both!

my life is pretty much screwed at the moment...

holy shit!! that sucks dude. Good luck with that man... i really dont know what to say.

me too. I uploaded mine, i am in a state of depression and anger and disbelief because last night my girl cheated on me. so, yes i admit i didn\'t finish my battle. i had one more page to go, but my heart\'s shattered and i\'m freaking lost right now! i mean, i\'m writting this here for god\'s sake! sorri guys...

uploaded just thought i\'d give you a heads up to keep in mind that im backpacking Europe whilst doing this, and i dont have photoshop... i used yucky publisher. So limited resoures. Enjoy!

thank god your limiting your self cause I got 2 battles now... EISH!! But yeah Banes back and ready for some action, hope i can do you justice.

thank god your limiting your self cause I got 2 battles now... EISH!! But yeah Banes back and ready for some action, hope i can do you justice.

Gonna try and limit meself to only doing max of 5 pages on this one...

Woa, 1st and Last time i saw Bane in action was when fighting Burake. 2 years, i wonder how your current stuff looks after two years of hiding.

Mr. Lang welcome to the gang. You know what to do and what i expect, you fukking drawing machine!

Hey mate, thanks for accepting! This should be interesting. Good luck man! (not that you\'ll need it... lol)