AmazingDavid: I know of charles burns and I do like his shading style. But I havnt actually read any of his comics.
Z: Thanks, I used a caligraphy pen (basicaly a marker but it gives nib looking results) for most of it, I really like working with that altho its abit hard to get really thin lines so that was done with a normal marker.
And yay for being told my art looks in any way like Eisners Im not trying to copy him in any concious way but I would be lying if I said he wasnt one of my favourite comicbook artists and writers. I especially like his layouts and paneling.
Oh and expect more acid trips in my future comics. But yeah I'll try to also include more story. atleast this time the comic only had 4 pages, my last one should have had that instead of 10 aswell. The pacing worked much better.
Massive Attack vs. Mr.Wallet
Critiques & Comments
# 16
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Oct 26 2009, 04:46 AM
# 15
Posted:
Oct 25 2009, 08:37 PM
Born loser...mmm charles burns? if you don't know him check him out...
Kon: you are so fucking french...it's awesome...I think it's great that you know Duchamps are you friends with Picasso too...I hear he lives in paris or something
Kon: you are so fucking french...it's awesome...I think it's great that you know Duchamps are you friends with Picasso too...I hear he lives in paris or something
# 14
Posted:
Oct 25 2009, 12:03 PM
Kon: I dont know what's your comic creation process, but you'd GREATLY benefit of using a grid in your comic. That said, while awkward, I can see youve been improving a lot in your anatomy. For the next battle though I want to see you spending more time while inking! Some of the stuff look rather rushed!
And I hope you vary the exposed sexual organs too!
BOBOBO-BOBO-BOBOO: Amazing entry. Your inks are very neat, I feel like you improved from page to page, being the third easily my favourite (and obviously you rushed in the last one).
I like that you do a very graphic comic in your attempts, opting for many visual effects, such as more dramactic panels, and differently panelling to describe action in a very Eisner way. It could be interesting to rule up stuff like straight backgrounds as you did in page one, but thats very optional.. jsut could obtain a even more precise result from technical view.
All your comics look like an acid trip to me, and thats cool, buuuut it would be nice to vary a bit and add more story, I think.. Like beeef it up!
And I hope you vary the exposed sexual organs too!
BOBOBO-BOBO-BOBOO: Amazing entry. Your inks are very neat, I feel like you improved from page to page, being the third easily my favourite (and obviously you rushed in the last one).
I like that you do a very graphic comic in your attempts, opting for many visual effects, such as more dramactic panels, and differently panelling to describe action in a very Eisner way. It could be interesting to rule up stuff like straight backgrounds as you did in page one, but thats very optional.. jsut could obtain a even more precise result from technical view.
All your comics look like an acid trip to me, and thats cool, buuuut it would be nice to vary a bit and add more story, I think.. Like beeef it up!
# 13
Posted:
Oct 25 2009, 11:04 AM
Does not compute
# 12
Posted:
Oct 25 2009, 07:57 AM
YOUR COMIC WAS AMAZING KON, I ESPECIALLY LIKED WALLETS HAIRY LEGS!
THE ENDING WAS JUST FABULOUS!
THE ENDING WAS JUST FABULOUS!
# 11
Posted:
Oct 25 2009, 06:42 AM
THANKS PONG!
BORNLOSER YOU COULD EASILY BE THE NEW ARTIST OF THE CENTURY, THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD. I SHOWED IT TO A FRIEND OF MINE (Marcel Duchamps) AND HE SAID IT WAS GENIOUS. I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO BE EDITED!
BORNLOSER YOU COULD EASILY BE THE NEW ARTIST OF THE CENTURY, THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD. I SHOWED IT TO A FRIEND OF MINE (Marcel Duchamps) AND HE SAID IT WAS GENIOUS. I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO BE EDITED!
# 10
Posted:
Oct 24 2009, 09:37 PM
WOW THESE ARE THE BEST COMICS I HAVE READ ON VOID. BEFORE I DIDN'T THINK I COULD SCORE SOME CHICKS- BUT NOW I THINK I MIGHT HAVE A CHANCE. THANKS GUYS!
# 9
Posted:
Oct 23 2009, 07:03 PM
YES THIS IS THE MOST EFFORT I HAVE EVER PUT INTO A COMIC IN MY WHOLE LIFE! SCHOOL DIDNT BOTHER ME AT ALL. I THINK IM READY TO APPLY FOR A JOB AT MARVEL OR DC COMICS NOW!
# 8
Posted:
Oct 23 2009, 06:12 PM
WOW THIS IS THE BEST COMIC I HAVE EVER DONE. I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO READ IT! I CAN GO TO BED NOW AFTER PUTTING SO MUCH EFFORT IN IT DURING THOSE FIVE WEEKS!
I'M SURE YOURS WILL BE EVEN BETTER
I'M SURE YOURS WILL BE EVEN BETTER
# 7
Posted:
Oct 11 2009, 03:43 AM
HERE YOU ARE BABY!!
# 6
Posted:
Oct 10 2009, 04:41 PM
Fuck my last week is getting cut off by a school trip and im leaving in hours. Gotta have an extention or Im doomed. Kon, go get it for me :_(
# 5
Posted:
Oct 9 2009, 06:12 AM
WE NEEEED MOOOOAAAARRR COMMMEEEENNNTTSSSS!!!
This is BATTLE OF THE YEAR
This is BATTLE OF THE YEAR
# 4
Posted:
Sep 19 2009, 10:08 AM
<bold> YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
# 3
Posted:
Sep 19 2009, 10:07 AM
glad to see you guys doing a rematch :O good luck!
# 2
Posted:
Sep 19 2009, 09:55 AM
Lets make it better than last time
# 1
Posted:
Sep 19 2009, 09:47 AM
GONNA LOOSE OR WIN I DUNNO LOL LOL LOL
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
4 weeks + 1
Ended:
Oct 31st, 2009
Votes Cast:
23
Page Views:
1846
Winner:
Kon
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Amazingdavid> Ahaha, I'm glad you enjoy my "french touch" since I AM FRENCH. Also Duchamps is dead, sorry