Kubo: It's fine it happens, you can post your comic later as a beyond battle which is always cool to see.

MRPR: I do like your line art in this it's a step up from your previous stuff and you always do such great characterization with Cassidy. Also I like the set up you had here but it did end in a bit of an anti-climax and no explanation as to why she wouldn't be interested in a prison. I just wish there was more and look forward to seeing more Cassidy stuff.

[[so stressed out about this I double posted. Ugh]]

I’m so sorry for missing my deadline, everyone. Earlier this month I had just found out that I’ll be moving to Bangkok,Thailand, before the end of the August. I’ve been packing like a mad man and completely lost track of the deadline for this comic. I thought I had until today and was just about to upload when I realized I was DAYS late. Ugh. I’m going to go back to packing but once I have the chance I’ll post the comic on the forum or something, MRPR deserves it. Sorry again, everyone.

MRPR: I have to agree with Flytee, it felt like a bit of a missed opportunity for this whole buildup to then result in Cassidy just being like "eh whatever". The last panel of page 2 also got a bit confusing--I get that it's a closeup but honestly I'm not quiiiiiiite sure what it is I'm supposed to be looking at there? That said, I love all of Cassidy's expressions, they're really fun

MRPR1993-
I can't help but feel like there was some wasted potential here. I was so on board at the start, you use the camera to take us on a little tour of void, only to have it hacked (?) and show us a mysterious immortal man. That was some really cool storytelling. I was so curious about who this dude was and how some crazy evil kid would react to him. So to have her just say "he's someone else's problem" really surprised me...it kinda made the ending feel flat and the story pointless.
I can think of a lot of reasons an chaotic evil person might want to explore this mystery, she looks likes shes capable of breaking into a prison.  

The fact it disappointed me so much shows how intriguing the set up was, so props to you for that side of the comic.
Also in general, it would've been nice to see some more pages/ a bit more of your opponant. ;_; But I understand that life and other commitments can take over.

Hrm.