Ach you need to give yourself more time to work and you need to stay away from short deadline challenges....you have yet to present a complete comic even when you do submit.
When you default you aren't just letting yourself down you are also letting your opponent down.
Jane Blonde vs. MUNKEI
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# 12
Posted:
Sep 22 2011, 09:08 AM
# 11
Posted:
Sep 21 2011, 01:50 PM
Good Job Mr. Kent.
Over all i liked where it was going... the last page looked obviously rushed... but still awesomely entertaining.
AchYaBam ---- all i can say is... "Bad Munkei! Bad! Go to your room!
Over all i liked where it was going... the last page looked obviously rushed... but still awesomely entertaining.
AchYaBam ---- all i can say is... "Bad Munkei! Bad! Go to your room!
# 10
Posted:
Sep 18 2011, 11:15 PM
I like how it started off Kent but the ending was a little weak. Poor Munkei
Few spelling mistakes aside, inks were clean, could've done with a little more dynamic angles, some panels seemed abit crowded.
Good work, keep it up
Ach, shame you didn't submit anything Maybe next time.
Few spelling mistakes aside, inks were clean, could've done with a little more dynamic angles, some panels seemed abit crowded.
Good work, keep it up
Ach, shame you didn't submit anything Maybe next time.
# 9
Posted:
Sep 18 2011, 12:35 PM
GOD DAMN IT ROFLQU: I'm hoping the promise you're breaking is no dialogue in your comic.
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Nono, that was the one thing he did keep. Do you see dialogue here at all?
Seriously Ach, you should learn to finish stuff before fighting. Or perhaps people should just stop fighting you until you can prove you're capable because each and every time this happens with you and its really annoying.
Kent - Nice comic, it felt a little weak compared to some of your other comics to me, and BenT already hit upon the background thing. All in all it was a decent comic with some funny bits, can't wait to see what you do next though!
# 8
Posted:
Sep 18 2011, 12:12 PM
I know I needs moar background Fail
But hopefully I'll have lots of background goodness when Jane fights Gossamer Swan--wel, at least the first two pages have them, so far...
I also see that some of my lines are messed up, which I *thought* I had fixed, but I need to be lots careful next time.
But hopefully I'll have lots of background goodness when Jane fights Gossamer Swan--wel, at least the first two pages have them, so far...
I also see that some of my lines are messed up, which I *thought* I had fixed, but I need to be lots careful next time.
# 7
Posted:
Sep 18 2011, 10:25 AM
yeah, that monkey is pretty much dead.
Kent, Y U NO BACKGROUND MOAR
Kent, Y U NO BACKGROUND MOAR
# 6
Posted:
Sep 18 2011, 07:08 AM
I'm hoping the promise you're breaking is no dialogue in your comic.
# 5
Posted:
Sep 17 2011, 07:22 PM
shouldnt ever make promises.
# 4
Posted:
Sep 11 2011, 10:29 PM
Good Luck Guys!!!
# 3
Posted:
Sep 11 2011, 06:36 AM
Heheh, actually The_Bent_One I intend NOT to have dialog in this one.
# 2
Posted:
Sep 10 2011, 11:10 PM
Ged, PU-LEAZE at least have dialogue this time
# 1
Posted:
Sep 10 2011, 10:03 PM
Wahey, this should be good.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Sep 24th, 2011
Votes Cast:
17
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Winner:
Mister Kent
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