I have a Johnny Patch challenge in mind against you when I get a chance (and if you want to do it!).
Love the really solid character designs you've drafted up for this, and a really strong setting with minimal props and environment. I feel like the very last panel of the last page is a little sparse and could have used some more flats, but I can understand that it would be tricky to balance that and letting Johnny & her dinos stand out.
Well done, and welcome!
Intro Story / Johnny Sweet
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Posted:
Nov 14 2012, 07:02 PM
# 1
Posted:
Nov 12 2012, 02:55 PM
Congrats on getting in! You've got a very solid first comic. Minor nitpicks: I think that the first panel of the second page where Johnny shoots the trinket out of the bandit's hand could have done with a sound effect to heighten the impact. Some other bits of action (Johnny's dino's tail smashing the other dino into the rock wall) could have been more emphasized or exaggerated a bit more to really pack that extra punch in.
Aside from that, welcome to void!
Aside from that, welcome to void!
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I enjoy the unique concept--it will be interesting to see more of Johnny's dino-infused world. Welcome to Void!