Love / Nova
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Belledraco
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# 24
Posted:
Feb 20 2009, 04:22 PM
Awww... Poor Nova! I know all about insecurities with teeth big enough to eat you alive... Great work! I just love the expressions, especially Nova's after he's called *snort* Cuddly Calamari! LOL!
# 23
Posted:
Feb 19 2009, 08:37 AM
ok. i know void's about getting better & all but slow down, fowlie. you're making the rest of us all look bad. seriously.
# 22
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Feb 18 2009, 11:10 AM
BWWWAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAQAHAHAHHAHA.....
I think I shat myself...nice one very nice no complaints here
I think I shat myself...nice one very nice no complaints here
# 21
Posted:
Feb 18 2009, 12:13 AM
Fowlie, you are going to break the top 10 doing comics about phonecalls and rape.
This really is an amazing world.
This really is an amazing world.
# 20
Posted:
Feb 17 2009, 12:43 PM
kozispoon: I love you Fowlie/Nova. D:
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Then come away with me!! We'll run away to the Yukon, and make love and comics all day long.... ; 3;
# 19
Posted:
Feb 17 2009, 12:36 PM
I love you Fowlie/Nova. D:
# 18
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Feb 17 2009, 07:20 AM
nova's getting so much depth! he's almost like...becoming a real person! his whole character & personalitiy are really fleshing out; i mean it seems liek that to me anyway. maybe i'm just now realizing it. anyhow, really awesome fowlie.
# 17
Posted:
Feb 16 2009, 08:27 PM
Okay time to actually critique you instead of just saying one thing haha
I'm getting more and more interested in where you are going to take Nova story wise and I'm excited about the next installment. I think working in color has really given you a lot of new possibilities with your art, I'm glad to see that you're trying to give every comic its own distinct look and mood which not many people do. While yes you probably could have moved the camera around some, I think it may have actually hurt what you were going for here so it was fine that you kept it stationary for the most part. I really don't have any suggestions other than to keep on chugging along with the story.
I'm getting more and more interested in where you are going to take Nova story wise and I'm excited about the next installment. I think working in color has really given you a lot of new possibilities with your art, I'm glad to see that you're trying to give every comic its own distinct look and mood which not many people do. While yes you probably could have moved the camera around some, I think it may have actually hurt what you were going for here so it was fine that you kept it stationary for the most part. I really don't have any suggestions other than to keep on chugging along with the story.
# 16
Posted:
Feb 16 2009, 10:23 AM
Funny stuff. I'm glad it's short because it's just silly fun. It's not supposed to be taken to seriously in terms of production or quality (in my opinion anyway). Just for enjoyment.
# 15
Posted:
Feb 15 2009, 05:48 PM
This was simply superb. It was fantastically funny, especially since it was done in so few pages.
Doc normally just creeps the living hell out of me, but this was all just too cute and sweet.
10 for entertainment!!
Doc normally just creeps the living hell out of me, but this was all just too cute and sweet.
10 for entertainment!!
# 14
Posted:
Feb 15 2009, 11:25 AM
you know, your comics are like one of the few stories that really gets me motivated to write my own good one. I love it This was so cute and the colors were perfect for me. You didn't overdo it; it was subtle and really gave the necessary mood for the holiday. The speech sounded really natural and wasn't forced. Nova's change of personality is believable! It wasn't too short, it ended where it needed to be. We're left to figure out what they did after ( or IF they do ). And this actually made me laugh out loud at the end, which is something that hardly happens with me heeheeh
You keep going with his story, Miss C:
You keep going with his story, Miss C:
# 13
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 09:31 PM
:3
# 12
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 08:26 PM
pfffffTHHAAHHAAHHAAHAAHAHAAAAAAA!!
Ogod, thanks, I really needed a good laugh today.
That was great. XD
Ogod, thanks, I really needed a good laugh today.
That was great. XD
# 11
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 01:27 PM
I like that they have dawgplz on the wall..
It wasn't too short, it was the perfect length.
It wasn't too short, it was the perfect length.
# 10
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 06:33 AM
I think this is the first time I've ever given a 10 for entertainment.
# 9
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 06:17 AM
Thank you, Fowl
# 8
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 04:58 AM
Ooowwwww sweet
# 7
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 04:50 AM
Such a disappointment for Katka :I
The comic was nearly perfect to me, I'd only like to tell you that maybe you couldvary up the camera sometimes, though I think it wasnt a problem, but rather just to keep things dinamic. Yes, nitpicking.
Rock on!
The comic was nearly perfect to me, I'd only like to tell you that maybe you couldvary up the camera sometimes, though I think it wasnt a problem, but rather just to keep things dinamic. Yes, nitpicking.
Rock on!
# 6
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 04:42 AM
Ow Fow, that was so sweet, best thing to read when waking up ha ha I like your work with colors like this, suits your style so much *even if this time it was mean to look cute and different from the mood you usually go for* I aprove this love! *I too wish there was more T_T
# 5
Posted:
Feb 14 2009, 01:01 AM
Pretty good Fow, not as strong as your last battle, but I think this suits the month perfectly. My only real complaints are: This comic is too short ;3. And on page 3 the text kinda gets a bit out of hand. I do understand that it was intentional, but it almost got to the point of being unreadable. Just keep an eye out for things like that, and if possible make the text a bit bold when somebody is shouting, that adds a bit more force to a character's voice.
Other than that you're doing well with this.
Other than that you're doing well with this.
# 4
Posted:
Feb 13 2009, 10:55 PM
I STILL DONT APPROVE OF YOUR HUSBAND FOWLIE
# 3
Posted:
Feb 13 2009, 10:48 PM
This is the best Valentine's gift for me ever. :>
# 2
Posted:
Feb 13 2009, 10:45 PM
Everyone stay away from RoflQu, I started spending more time talking to him, and LOOK WHAT HAPPENED. I caught the gay.
# 1
Posted:
Feb 13 2009, 10:45 PM
hahaaahah Fowlie made this the best Valentines day EVER <3
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