Stealrehn- excellent use of textures here, it really made the backgrounds pop. The chair on page 3 was well drawn too.
You have an intriguing character, great work!

Invaderdiz- What stands out about your work is your clean lines which help guide the reader through the shapes and the pages. You have an efficient style and I think that really helps  you  in these 1 weekers. Great work!

Very fun reads!

Rehn: You did fantastic for your first one weeker. It kills me how good you are with stories and script. The transition between her ptsd and coming too in Amelias office was fantastic. This works as a wonderful intro for MF into void! Your anatomy and the stiffness is still a work in progress but you improving in leaps and bounds

Diz: I do enjoy your style I just wish I got to see some color in this one or even some flat blacks. It can be tough to come up with a script around a character that doesn't have and intro or a comic yet (I should know I do it to people all the time). I liked Mf showcasiing her combat skills to try and get the job, not certain what kind of job she was going for. Security? Guard? Babysitter? Still congrats on finishing your round.

Both of you did a fantastic job!

nice work you guys, you're both showing a lot of improvement

You both managed a lot for a one weeker! But both lacked backgrounds in a pretty noticeable way. Diz, yours had too much empty space, and rehn your was the opposite, it felt cramped and claustrophobic. But! I know comics are hard im just happy you both turned in something complete! Diz, i liked your inks! Rehn, the colours and textures of the first two pages were excellent for setting up a battlefield! (Though for the rest, i think the foreground colours and background colours were a little too close).
Great job dudes!

Thanks! The only thing I’m a little critical with on mine is the length. Wish I had done a little more.

Oohh interesting direction, Diz! Working right off the bat to give MF a new purpose, I like it! Real solid line work on your end also, and I liked the way the long scrolling pages flowed! Super easy to keep track of what was going on!

Wow these two entries were tight. Diz you have some super clean line work there. And Rehn. I really like the panel placement along with the colors. You two keep it up!!! I would like to see more from the both of ya

Steal, your side of this is composed super nicely, and I like that you showed the caring side of Amelia in yours. Very cool!