Priest to meet you / Adwell Morris and Merrik Sanderson
Critiques & Comments
# 10
Posted:
Jan 26 2018, 06:15 PM
Very colorful! I really liked it
# 9
Posted:
Jan 25 2018, 07:44 PM
Oh my gosh I loved it. I enjoyed the lighthearted tone and your styles mesh well together, you two make a great team!
(Also I love the clothes you gave Adwell in the last panel, the bunny print is adorable.)
(Also I love the clothes you gave Adwell in the last panel, the bunny print is adorable.)
# 8
Posted:
Jan 25 2018, 07:20 AM
This is really adorable. What can I really say? It's a clean and beautiful little comic and you guys made a wonderful team. I'd love to see you two pair up again because this is some top-notch quality.
# 7
Posted:
Jan 24 2018, 03:55 PM
WOW! You guys make a truly visually stunning pair.
This comic is very nicely inked, colored, and paneled in my opinion!
I agree that sometimes a simple, friendly meet up between characters like this can leave things to be desired, but I still feel like this is a nice look into an easygoing event as they get acquainted. It's nice to see some characters having a genuine good time for a change ha ha.
Personally, I enjoy the set up!
Great job, the both of you!!
This comic is very nicely inked, colored, and paneled in my opinion!
I agree that sometimes a simple, friendly meet up between characters like this can leave things to be desired, but I still feel like this is a nice look into an easygoing event as they get acquainted. It's nice to see some characters having a genuine good time for a change ha ha.
Personally, I enjoy the set up!
Great job, the both of you!!
# 6
Posted:
Jan 24 2018, 11:51 AM
Personally, I felt like this could've used maybe an extra page or two. Sure, I like that they're becoming friends, and that they go and enjoy themselves during Halloween, but I kind of feel that them becoming friends might've been a little... instant.
Still, it was an entertaining read, and I look forward to seeing how this plays out in the long run.
Still, it was an entertaining read, and I look forward to seeing how this plays out in the long run.
# 5
Posted:
Jan 24 2018, 10:52 AM
This comic is visually stunning, but meet and greet comics kind of don't do anything for me without some intrigue. I can't tell what this is leading up to, if it was leading up to anything at all.
I feel like I'm scrolling through a stranger's Instagram. Sure they're having fun, but I'm not.
I feel like I'm scrolling through a stranger's Instagram. Sure they're having fun, but I'm not.
# 4
Posted:
Jan 22 2018, 09:13 AM
GUYYYYSSSSS I LOVE THESE TWO SO MUCH! I don't even know what to critique story-wise, because it was pretty much perfect. The humor was spot-on, and seeing them have fun together was heartwarming. That line at the end where Merrik is saying "just a friend" was great; I could feel the saltiness in that statement haha. I think my only real advice is to watch out for oversaturation. I noticed it mostly with your greens, especially on that last page. Since most of the outdoor parts of the comic were primarily blue, diluting your other colors with just a touch of blue would have helped. Even just bringing down the whole saturation could have helped a little, but I mostly just noticed the greens and some oranges that really stuck out. Still, this was a near-perfect comic imo, and I hope you two keep writing comics with these two!
# 3
Posted:
Jan 20 2018, 04:42 PM
Holy smokes that was UNFAIR cute like oh my god how dare you make something this adorable i am losing my SHIT A+++++++ i love these boys
# 2
Posted:
Jan 20 2018, 03:14 PM
is adwell still a priest or a precious muffin? YOU CONFUSES ME
# 1
Posted:
Jan 20 2018, 01:40 PM
This was such a delight to read! <3
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