thanx fer all the comments folks.... the next fight is definitely gonna be more developed.... especially if all goes to plan....*evil laugh* ...
n BTW don\'t worry RTV, when I\'m done wit fel I\'m comin after you next... MMMMWWWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

but naw i really appreciate u guys, wish chao could\'ve got his work in, but what can ya do, shit happens, next time i hope i\'ll have enough time to do more ellaborate backgrounds, cause i ran outa time in this one, and aaaaaaa, thas it, oh and thanx to all who voted still..... would\'ve been a bitch w/o u guys

-Kid,
 you\'ve got a pretty interesting style going on there, it will stay interesting if it doesn\'t change very page. On page four i enjoy how you drew Baskins entering the scene, i\'m liking the details in that close up panel too.  Nice introduction too.
 On page seven panel three, i love that panel. -However, if you added blood, spit or any floating dot, it might convey more power of impact.
Kid\'s transformation looked pretty bad ass too.
The totally out of place Juggernaut killed me as well as the redundant joking during the fight, very entertaining.
 Good touch up in the beginning explaining what the fukk Kid\'s been upto. I know not everyone can keep track. Your dialogues look like they are \'free transformed\', squashed or stretched. The floating shadow on the text bubbles kinda take the depht of the art away.
Other than that, you\'ve got me curious where the story goes with the Brotherhood.

I mean if you\'re looking for P2 sooner or later you\'re gonna have to deal with the rest.
*evil laughter*

-Chao
I understand man....i understand.
*silent weep*

I think its time we kick Chao out of void- wtf bro!

FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUCCCKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A Shocking amount of improvement! Although I think it was feeling a liul rushed after the first 3 pages. The first 2 pages knocked me outta my seat.

AIN\'T DAT BOUTA BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -_-

Good showing Kid, your work is getting stronger. I agree that you still need work on your backgrounds.Your anatomy is lookin great but your proportion is off a little. You are a caricature artist, and we all struggle to tame the out of proportion thing. The inking is sweet, your b/w work is very strong. Your panel flow is a bit choppy in places but its not a major thing. Keep up the good work man!!

Pretty good show kid, Chao... *grrr...*

Ok, Kid, if you give me your AIM, I think I can help you out with your word balloons, (AIM = redbloodphill) Anywho, artwise you\'ve really improved, but you did sorta point out that you lack experiance in backgrounds, you really gotta hit up some perspective tutorials and some of shortfury\'s detail tutorials. But aside from that you\'ve really improved figure wise bud, it kinda got a bit half assed on some pages, but your inking is also standing out beautifully.

Sorry about the default win, but let\'s see some more from ya ok?

aight folks, my fights up and ready.... just wanna say first and formost i\'m sorry about the word bubbles, just put the words in just now and started getting frustrated to the point where i didn\'t give a damn anymore, cause i couldn\'t figure out how to outline \'em...... and other than that, some of the panels were half assed, cause we\'re learning after effects in class, n between that and workin at office depot, i ran outa time before i could complete finish the fight, other than that, i\'m still happy with it, so ahh.... hope you guys enjoy

Go getum kid!!

Well paint my back and call me a BITCH!!!

Good Matchup

Its nice to see someone from the brotherhood crew still around. g\'luck to ya both!

Look like someone for the brotherhood is back in the game. Good to see you kidscribbles, let\'s see what got. This should be good.

this.. will be interesting