Gnome Fight! / Pita vs. Orion

Gnome Fight! / Pita vs. Orion

Gnome Fight! — Pita vs. Orion

by Pita

This comic has been rated suitable for teens and up by its creator(s)

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60.2%
339 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Marked for SALTY language.

I've been drawing Orion's rowdy little bogan for a while, so having a comic with him in it was super fun.

Please challenge me with your adventure kids. I want to do more artist matches with tabletop characters.
tags: also my cleric is here, ask orion about the gnome lore, gnome fight


by Orion

This comic has been rated suitable for all ages by its creator(s)

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39.8%
224 points
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Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
Based off our DND characters and some other fun! Ended up a slow start to this and ended up running out of time so I wasn’t able to get the pages finished and left out 2. Unfinished but not for long.
tags: gnome fight




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PyrasTerran
Global Moderator
1493 comments
# 13   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 05:56 PM
Pita: This comic is as cozy as that bed! The only major complaint is the large panel in page 1 with way too many silhouettes instead of colorful side characters, and I think you're at a point now with your quality of art that you can start looking into professional-izing other parts, notably the word balloons here, the lines are spaced a bit too much to feel finished

Orion: I liked how the story was being written, shame that it isn't finished

Keep it up guys!

snager
Artist
207 comments
# 12   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 10:53 AM
Pita: this was SO cute! such a nice pallet cleanser after marathoning the current DEATH tournament hajaa. and the quality is :chef's hand: and the characters are all so flavorful. I wish to stay at the leopard gecko's inn severely.

Orion: I was really feeling the story book vibe and was getting into it. kinda sad I don't get to find out what the giant was going to do! felt like I was playing Once Upon a Time, my favorite table top game, mixed with that old animated series called Hungarian Folktales. I have a good children's story book art style if you wanna collab some time! XD

Flytee
Artist
268 comments
# 11   Posted: Sep 3 2021, 03:46 AM
cuuute! I love the idea of making comics about ttrpg characters- I might nick this for a future art battle.

Pita- charming art, simple but fun story!
I think this comic would have benefited from some more atmospheric colours and/or lighting, to really capture the warm fantasy tavern vibe. Everything felt a bit stark like they were on a stage set.

Orion- oh nooo ;_; shame you couldn't finish, this looks promising. Hopefully, you can sus out some time management that works for you because I would love to see more completed comics from you. I will say, I would take a completed comic that's made up of cleaned-up pencils, over something like this.

TheCydork
Artist
581 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 29 2021, 11:49 PM
Pita - This was super cute T.T I love how you give the gnomes funny little ears and bulbous noses to differentiate them from humans. The mushrooms outside the inn and the fellow tending to the ducks were whimsical while also enforcing the gnomes’ size, which was great. The last page was probably my favourite because I loved the old gnome as well as the twist XD

Orion - Ngl I’m kinda disappointed... you’ve defaulted or submitted incompletes for every battle except 24 hour ones for a year plus. You seem to actually do better on stricter time limits where you don’t have a chance to procrastinate. Maybe you need someone to poke you for progress updates when you’re on a deadline? Or set smaller daily goals for how much to do? I know you can make good, complete comics Orion 😤

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
299 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 29 2021, 01:31 PM
There were very cute. I'm guessing its some dnd shenanigans

Platinumartist
Artist
87 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 28 2021, 02:30 PM
Both had very nice coloring and I really wish we could've seen the both sides done but I am grateful that there is something to read. You did did great and I hope to see more from you two in the near future

Kilcra
Artist
54 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 27 2021, 10:12 AM
Pita: Gorgeous comic! Clav and Billiam are so simple and fun in this! I love that failure is met with humiliation and comfort too, like the comic doesn't end with Billiam going bankrupt trying to pay Sally back. They end up helping each other in the end, and it's adorable.

Orion: I like that it reads like a childrens picture book and less like a comic. It's really charming and this style of writing slowed the pace of the comic in a really cool way! I also like that the monologue plays with the images. For instance, you see the guy throw an apple and he says "he returned his apple." It reminds me of people relaying an event and trying to make themselves look as innocent as possible. Hope we get to see it finished soon!

Pita
Community Manager
250 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 24 2021, 08:36 AM
Gnomes were submitted at midnight


Keepin it short, my side was well underway before we had to reschedule, so I only gave myself a sliver of the time to finish up to keep the fight fair.  I'm rooting for you, Orion!  Give us the gnomes!

Orion
Artist
223 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 21 2021, 08:35 AM
Let it be Gnomed!

Pita
Community Manager
250 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 20 2021, 07:36 AM
This was meant to be done in April, but we had to reschedule.
In short, Orion promised me gnomes for the Bamboozle Short and Sweet, and now I've come to collect on that promise.

TheCydork
Artist
581 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 19 2021, 06:52 PM
GNOME FIGHT!!!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
299 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 19 2021, 01:31 PM
Guard your shins!!!

Footini
Artist
318 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 19 2021, 12:23 PM
WERE BACK IN FOLKS!!!

No knees.will be safe from.GNOME FIGHT

Comic Details -

 
Type: Artist Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Sep 3rd, 2021
Votes Cast: 16
Page Views: 364
Winner: Pita
 

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