Mize vs. Mjolinir vs. P2 vs. Ashito
Critiques & Comments
the Falcon
24 comments
# 62
Posted:
Jul 12 2006, 06:53 AM
I don\'t understand why people give Ashito more points than P2. I mean, Zombi didn\'t even finish the story…?
# 61
Posted:
Jul 8 2006, 04:09 PM
I\'m still reading these. Did they really have to be so long?
# 60
Posted:
Jul 6 2006, 04:56 PM
yes jesse but wat will Monday do about it......hmmm indeed MUA HAHAHAHAHA
# 59
Posted:
Jul 6 2006, 02:20 PM
Humina
humina
humina
humina
humina
# 58
Posted:
Jul 6 2006, 11:36 AM
Fel, I got the storyline linking thing, too, but it was kinda weird because it seemed like you were setting the stage for the 3-way, which you\'re not involved in, and which Monday already set the stage for with his BB. THAT is what confused me, really. Nothing else.
# 57
Posted:
Jul 5 2006, 06:02 PM
hahahahahahaaaa, that was worth the wait. truly worth the wait.
# 56
Posted:
Jul 5 2006, 04:00 PM
wow someone actually noticed me trying to link several story arcs together...was damn near convinced i should give the story telling shit up but thanks.
wei..u have showed me that u can tangle no matter wat u say, i wish u would of got to do more with this cuz i no u got a ass whupping to unleash, but i think ur the only guy i know with an isane schedule...so pulling off wat u did u got my respect
zombi...u bastard and no not due to the pages u got to turn in...i say that cuz all the ones u DIDN\'T GET TO TURN IN, i won\'t deny u the fact that if u even turned half the stuff u had....u would of crushed all of us, makes me glad i got u on my roster, so i\'m slighty sad i didn\'t get to see p2 in ur fight but u better post the rest as a beyond battle damnit
mamoru i been told u wat i thought...even as u was making it, colors are eye catching as usual, and loved the fight scenes ...especially where mize and ashito became weapons themselves.
Like the \"i hate u but ur my co-worker\" vibe u gave mize and ashito and how u ended it with everyone floored out of breath.
gives us better grounds to start our rematch on
wei..u have showed me that u can tangle no matter wat u say, i wish u would of got to do more with this cuz i no u got a ass whupping to unleash, but i think ur the only guy i know with an isane schedule...so pulling off wat u did u got my respect
zombi...u bastard and no not due to the pages u got to turn in...i say that cuz all the ones u DIDN\'T GET TO TURN IN, i won\'t deny u the fact that if u even turned half the stuff u had....u would of crushed all of us, makes me glad i got u on my roster, so i\'m slighty sad i didn\'t get to see p2 in ur fight but u better post the rest as a beyond battle damnit
mamoru i been told u wat i thought...even as u was making it, colors are eye catching as usual, and loved the fight scenes ...especially where mize and ashito became weapons themselves.
Like the \"i hate u but ur my co-worker\" vibe u gave mize and ashito and how u ended it with everyone floored out of breath.
gives us better grounds to start our rematch on
# 55
Posted:
Jul 5 2006, 03:39 PM
This is basically a toss-up between Mamoru and Felle, since they were the only two with complete entries.
Zombi, aside from the RIDICULOUS quality that you have in your pages, I was really expecting more from you. I mean, everything was so huge and epic and monstrous; I was really disappointed to have it be incomplete. Congratulations on your marriage, and I hope that you complete this entry with whatever free time you have in the future.
Wei, your pencils are seriously some of the best around, but it just doesn\'t cut it this time. I also have some beef with how old and masculine Mize looks (he\'s supposed to be a bit femmy, isn\'t he?) but that\'s just a little thing. Anyway, it was still a good entry, and I hope to see completed stuff from you in the future. Maybe a lite 3-page BB sometime?
Mamoru, damn, you pulled out the stops for this one. I didn\'t even notice that you edited the fight to include Mjoliner and P2, and that\'s a good sign. There was a significant drop in quality starting at page 14, and continued on for a good bit, so I marked you down for that. The story itself was short and simple, although I\'m still wondering what happened to the giant fire snake that they were supposed to take care of. Also, I\'m very much glad to see your colors again, and I\'m glad you decided to run with them for this round. I don\'t have the guts to throw down with you just yet, but definitely one of these days.
Feleny, that was some hardcore shit. Maybe I\'m the only one who thought the storyline was brilliant, but then again, it\'s all tying up the different arcs that have been occuring in some previous battles. you had me thinking \"Oh shit, what happens next?! Who\'s that?!\" the whole time, and props for that. Definitely some of your best work to date, the improvement from past stuff is very apparent. The quality was also consistent and the pin-up/splash pages were beautiful. You\'ve got the win from me, there\'s a reason you\'re at the top of the list.
Zombi, aside from the RIDICULOUS quality that you have in your pages, I was really expecting more from you. I mean, everything was so huge and epic and monstrous; I was really disappointed to have it be incomplete. Congratulations on your marriage, and I hope that you complete this entry with whatever free time you have in the future.
Wei, your pencils are seriously some of the best around, but it just doesn\'t cut it this time. I also have some beef with how old and masculine Mize looks (he\'s supposed to be a bit femmy, isn\'t he?) but that\'s just a little thing. Anyway, it was still a good entry, and I hope to see completed stuff from you in the future. Maybe a lite 3-page BB sometime?
Mamoru, damn, you pulled out the stops for this one. I didn\'t even notice that you edited the fight to include Mjoliner and P2, and that\'s a good sign. There was a significant drop in quality starting at page 14, and continued on for a good bit, so I marked you down for that. The story itself was short and simple, although I\'m still wondering what happened to the giant fire snake that they were supposed to take care of. Also, I\'m very much glad to see your colors again, and I\'m glad you decided to run with them for this round. I don\'t have the guts to throw down with you just yet, but definitely one of these days.
Feleny, that was some hardcore shit. Maybe I\'m the only one who thought the storyline was brilliant, but then again, it\'s all tying up the different arcs that have been occuring in some previous battles. you had me thinking \"Oh shit, what happens next?! Who\'s that?!\" the whole time, and props for that. Definitely some of your best work to date, the improvement from past stuff is very apparent. The quality was also consistent and the pin-up/splash pages were beautiful. You\'ve got the win from me, there\'s a reason you\'re at the top of the list.
# 54
Posted:
Jul 5 2006, 08:35 AM
Infinite extensions? Have you broken my record yet? lol
These pages look incredibly fukking awesome, i just went through a quick browse. I\'ll read it when i get back on my own net later today.
Felony, you\'re catching up on that movie shit we were talking about. I notice some huge detail and perspective improvements.
These pages look incredibly fukking awesome, i just went through a quick browse. I\'ll read it when i get back on my own net later today.
Felony, you\'re catching up on that movie shit we were talking about. I notice some huge detail and perspective improvements.
# 53
Posted:
Jul 5 2006, 06:18 AM
is it ok if i send in what i have right now? i know ive been a super jerk for asking for infinite extensions, but i got alot more done. and some text. is that cool?
# 52
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 06:22 PM
I like just about all sides of this battle. There quality was comin off of my screen(in a non- \"the ring\" sorta way:)) I dunno who im gonna give it too. But i have a question.
Is there a final verdict on whether these new modes will be available to publik void use?
Is there a final verdict on whether these new modes will be available to publik void use?
# 51
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 04:18 PM
Mamo got my vote followed by Fel\'s. They had the most complete of stories and decent all around. Good job guys. Wei, you have this awesome creative story starting out and it cut short, I\'m sure had you have more time maybe you can do more. Zombi, I was so amazed by the high quality of your pages, I was so down to see it end so soon. Quality wise you got everyone beat but everything else suffered for it.
All in all, major love in all directions!
All in all, major love in all directions!
# 50
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 03:49 PM
Zombi... Your fight is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen on this site. It literally blew the top off my rating standards. I felt like I needed to give you BETTER than an A in Quality becuase I have given A\'s for so much lesser work.
I am begging you; FINISH YOUR BATTLE. Do a BB, or post it on the forums, or whatever. You owe it to the world. We NEED to experience the completed beauty.
That said, I gave the fight to Mamoru for consistent quality across the board: art, concept, and story.
Fel, I liked how much you brought to the table with this fight, art-wise. Your writing style is still a bit confusing to me. Basically, what I took away from it was that Johnny Warsaw hired Theatre Hazard to kill Paddy McBastard. But... I thought Johnny and Paddy were on the same side. Is there some sort of plot twist that would have explained it that you didn\'t get to include in this fight?
Wei, you\'re great at drawing. That much is really apparent. What is also apparent is that you consistently bite off more than you can chew with your battles. Maybe aim a little lower next time, to give us a finished, inked, colored battle? I for one would really look forward to that.
I am begging you; FINISH YOUR BATTLE. Do a BB, or post it on the forums, or whatever. You owe it to the world. We NEED to experience the completed beauty.
That said, I gave the fight to Mamoru for consistent quality across the board: art, concept, and story.
Fel, I liked how much you brought to the table with this fight, art-wise. Your writing style is still a bit confusing to me. Basically, what I took away from it was that Johnny Warsaw hired Theatre Hazard to kill Paddy McBastard. But... I thought Johnny and Paddy were on the same side. Is there some sort of plot twist that would have explained it that you didn\'t get to include in this fight?
Wei, you\'re great at drawing. That much is really apparent. What is also apparent is that you consistently bite off more than you can chew with your battles. Maybe aim a little lower next time, to give us a finished, inked, colored battle? I for one would really look forward to that.
# 49
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 03:36 PM
the fact that I got as much done as I did was an undertaking in itself.....I have been working massive amounts of overtime the last few weeks..I redid my plans and sketches at least three times....I let myself become too involved with the undertaking rather than just sit the fuck down and doing it..got too worried about making it good enough and big enough instead of worrying about getting it finished..and then all my free time got sucked up by my job, my life and the SDT ...but yah the art is crappy....just not enough there.....I truly don\'t expect to win or come in anything less than last.....but I am glad people are appreciative of the effort I put into the story if not the time for the art
that being said here are my honest and unabashed responses to the other entries
ZOMBI: great art..no doubt....great art......but where the hell are the pages?......this is all the stuff you were working on fer your original fight with Mam from weeks before we started this one.... they are pretty damn-tastic.. but you got absolutely nothing about P2 or Mjolinir anywhere.... I know you have had a shitload on the go as well..BIG life altering shit..but you had how many weeks before we scheduled this and how many weeks since?.
...to be honest you defaulted....you didn\'t include all of your opponents in the comic
Mam: great stuff as always....but the addition of the pages containing P2 and Mjolinir to the original storyline and art you had for your fight vs. Zombi is very apparent.....the images are much sloppier and rushed....still you managed to pull the story off quite well....meshing together with your original script...the art just wasn\'t there consistently for the whole comic...good stuff overall........you got the win if you ask me
fel: great lookin....but yah it got sorta confusin and too much was going on with too little explanation....you need to work on having the substance to go with all that style...in my opinion you come out a second by a hair
that being said here are my honest and unabashed responses to the other entries
ZOMBI: great art..no doubt....great art......but where the hell are the pages?......this is all the stuff you were working on fer your original fight with Mam from weeks before we started this one.... they are pretty damn-tastic.. but you got absolutely nothing about P2 or Mjolinir anywhere.... I know you have had a shitload on the go as well..BIG life altering shit..but you had how many weeks before we scheduled this and how many weeks since?.
...to be honest you defaulted....you didn\'t include all of your opponents in the comic
Mam: great stuff as always....but the addition of the pages containing P2 and Mjolinir to the original storyline and art you had for your fight vs. Zombi is very apparent.....the images are much sloppier and rushed....still you managed to pull the story off quite well....meshing together with your original script...the art just wasn\'t there consistently for the whole comic...good stuff overall........you got the win if you ask me
fel: great lookin....but yah it got sorta confusin and too much was going on with too little explanation....you need to work on having the substance to go with all that style...in my opinion you come out a second by a hair
# 48
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 02:26 PM
zombi....holy fucking hell that was amazing D8 A on quality. i was gunna bump you down for entertainment coz i didn\'t know what the hell was going on, but the art was entertaining enough so you got an A there too. i think your fight was my favourite o__o
mamoru comes in second. best story out of the four, and second best in quality. i don\'t relaly know what else to say....but it was really good.
wei, decent story, but the art was lacking. i mean, it wasn\'t bad, but given so much time i thought there woulda been more to it than just pencilings. at least inked, maybe coloured.
fel, i can see you getting better with each comic, i really enjoyed the visuals. only problem is the way you set up the story is pretty confusing, and it seemed like you were trying to do too much at once.
well, great fights from all of you, i really enjoyed reading all of these!
mamoru comes in second. best story out of the four, and second best in quality. i don\'t relaly know what else to say....but it was really good.
wei, decent story, but the art was lacking. i mean, it wasn\'t bad, but given so much time i thought there woulda been more to it than just pencilings. at least inked, maybe coloured.
fel, i can see you getting better with each comic, i really enjoyed the visuals. only problem is the way you set up the story is pretty confusing, and it seemed like you were trying to do too much at once.
well, great fights from all of you, i really enjoyed reading all of these!
# 47
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 11:35 AM
I give P2 the award for most cameos to be placed in a single battle.
Man this thing is awesome, I am in love with it.
Man this thing is awesome, I am in love with it.
# 46
Posted:
Jul 4 2006, 10:48 AM
crap....there\'s supposed to be 13 pages....dammit
# 45
Posted:
Jun 25 2006, 11:05 PM
Wow, if there is a half naked ashito in your comic brother mamoru...you will have made my day. :DDDDD
# 44
Posted:
Jun 25 2006, 07:01 PM
5 hours is not enoughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
# 43
Posted:
Jun 25 2006, 10:20 AM
yes..half naked Ashito is my gift for Ashito and Ashito\'s fans!
And Ashito bro, congratulations to you and 4L1.
And Ashito bro, congratulations to you and 4L1.
# 42
Posted:
Jun 25 2006, 01:48 AM
i\'m only finishing this because i respect u fuckers or else this would be a bullshit run......and plus this is my gift to zombi
DOOM!!
DOOM!!
# 41
Posted:
Jun 20 2006, 09:52 AM
I\'m still EXETREMELY busy...and some fool girl is actually gonna marry zombi .. we thought it neccesary
# 40
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 11:08 PM
mua hahaha now i can finish my master piece ,tonite page 38 tomorrow THE WORLD
# 39
Posted:
Jun 19 2006, 08:58 PM
You guys really know how to keep people in suspense.
# 38
Posted:
Jun 17 2006, 06:02 AM
ARG 2 days (stays at terrys house forever)(and is a post whore)
# 37
Posted:
Jun 9 2006, 03:14 PM
/cry like 8 houirs left and i wont be on at that time...must mooch off terry X_X i sooooo gots to read this!
# 36
Posted:
Jun 8 2006, 11:44 AM
hmm with an extenstion granted i believe it would be a crime to not bring it
# 35
Posted:
Jun 8 2006, 01:15 AM
well, you guys drive a hard bargain... ill give you two extensions as well
you know what, ill even give myself an extension!
seriouslt though, lets not dissappoint the fans everyone, DO YOUR BEST!
you know what, ill even give myself an extension!
seriouslt though, lets not dissappoint the fans everyone, DO YOUR BEST!
# 34
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 11:19 PM
YES! Two..Two more weeks!!
# 33
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 09:26 PM
hey hey i want an extension too.... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me we have it
# 32
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 07:10 PM
thats good to hear, i dont want you defualting on us
you know what, im feeling generous, ill give you two more weeks. use them wisely
and this is the last time ill be this leanient.
you know what, im feeling generous, ill give you two more weeks. use them wisely
and this is the last time ill be this leanient.
# 31
Posted:
Jun 7 2006, 04:46 PM
Due to some unfortunate circumstances at work this week....I have requested an extension on the match......yet another fucker quit on me and I have to cover the shifts...so I won\'t have the time to finish my fight
# 30
Posted:
Jun 4 2006, 12:37 AM
Why did I agree to this again?
# 29
Posted:
May 31 2006, 09:00 PM
I don\'t care to disclose what I did in my pants when I saw this battle.
# 28
Posted:
May 23 2006, 09:56 AM
this is definately gonna be good.... it better be!!
# 27
Posted:
May 22 2006, 09:25 AM
# 26
Posted:
May 21 2006, 05:17 PM
FEL WHATS YOU EMAIL?!
i have to send u stuff
hows the progress so far guys?
i have to send u stuff
hows the progress so far guys?
# 25
Posted:
May 12 2006, 09:13 PM
Geez, it feels like its been ONE FOREVER since this fight got up, but there\'s still ONE FOREVER to go! *Sets alarm clock to go off in one forever(s)*
# 24
Posted:
May 11 2006, 03:42 AM
Yes, Yes, Yes!!! This is what dreams are made of. Now I want to is a not so clean fight. Let\'s get it on.
# 23
Posted:
May 10 2006, 11:30 PM
My excitement for this is tripled by the fact that it\'s due date is on my birthday.
This will be a battle to remember.
This will be a battle to remember.
# 22
Posted:
May 10 2006, 11:29 PM
im kind of shaking right now..
But none of y\'all should feel relaxed!!
and my can of whoop-ass may be lite but it sure kicks like an energy drink!
But none of y\'all should feel relaxed!!
and my can of whoop-ass may be lite but it sure kicks like an energy drink!
# 21
Posted:
May 10 2006, 06:30 PM
my can of whop-ass is at least twice as big as yours, sir!
# 20
Posted:
May 10 2006, 05:46 PM
you fuckers better be hard at work, DOOM!!!!!!!!!
# 19
Posted:
May 6 2006, 01:03 PM
so much fer conversation....it\'s clobberin time
seriously one of you buggers hit me up and lemme know the groundrules
seriously one of you buggers hit me up and lemme know the groundrules
# 18
Posted:
May 6 2006, 03:44 AM
Jeez... Zombi and Mamoru can\'t seem to leave each other alone. Anything to that?
# 17
Posted:
May 6 2006, 03:34 AM
ummm. hey guys? just try and leave SOME of void city standing at the end of this, please? i mean, i know smoldering craters are cool and all...
# 16
Posted:
May 5 2006, 06:05 PM
Wow....
It\'s gonna be a bloody battle~ <3
It\'s gonna be a bloody battle~ <3
# 15
Posted:
May 5 2006, 05:54 PM
*standing ovulation*
# 14
Posted:
May 5 2006, 04:52 PM
and remember what the Zombi said: No Boobies and Badunkadunks on this match!!
This is an all out slobberknuckle-fest!!
This is an all out slobberknuckle-fest!!
# 13
Posted:
May 5 2006, 02:59 PM
*really barfs out her insides*
# 12
Posted:
May 5 2006, 11:55 AM
Void has now become WCE, \"World Comicart Entertainment\".....we got the tag team matches, the Fatal 4 way matches, triple threat matches And last but not least, Armageddon...lol yay
# 11
Posted:
May 5 2006, 11:50 AM
To quote Futurama:
Fry: \"Wahhhhhh! We\'re gonna die!! ....right?\"
Bender: \"Right.\"
Fry: \"...WahhhhHH!!!\"
Awesuma! *swig*
Fry: \"Wahhhhhh! We\'re gonna die!! ....right?\"
Bender: \"Right.\"
Fry: \"...WahhhhHH!!!\"
Awesuma! *swig*
# 10
Posted:
May 5 2006, 11:46 AM
We\'re all gonna diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiie!> ....wait a second....D:<
# 9
Posted:
May 5 2006, 08:00 AM
holy shit! I can safely say i did not see this coming
# 8
Posted:
May 5 2006, 02:23 AM
O_O *heavenly music*
# 7
Posted:
May 5 2006, 01:11 AM
Beautiful.
Go all out guys
Go all out guys
# 6
Posted:
May 5 2006, 01:06 AM
HOLY SHIT THERE IS A GOD AFTER ALL :DDDDDDDDDD
# 5
Posted:
May 5 2006, 01:00 AM
A Bloody good way to start a new season in the summer
# 4
Posted:
May 5 2006, 12:54 AM
WORDS OF EXCITEMENT!!!
# 3
Posted:
May 5 2006, 12:52 AM
more special effects then all 3 mission impossible movies COMBINED!!!!
# 2
Posted:
May 5 2006, 12:48 AM
IT HAS BEGUN!!
# 1
Posted:
May 5 2006, 12:47 AM
DUN DUN DUN!! death to infidels!!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
8 weeks
Ended:
Jul 12th, 2006
Votes Cast:
57
Page Views:
2943
Winner:
Mamoru
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