Heavyweight Tournament 2005: Round 1 / Fushigi vs. Charlie
Critiques & Comments
# 39
Posted:
Jun 20 2014, 03:36 PM
Its always fun to catch a classic now and again to realize how much artists like sheldon have grawn with his style.
# 38
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!! nice
damn funny for both sides, though charlies is better
damn funny for both sides, though charlies is better
# 37
i think all the cameo\'s are ILL!! thanks for the props, shelde!
# 36
fushi that was a nice comic. shelde that was very hot on pg 6 and 7
# 35
HAHAHA! XD Shelde' - your art/writing style is so fucking skillfully expressive I can't stand it. Hilarious. "FUSHIGI! WAIT!!" hahaha - that so wrong!
Fushigi - good job - I'm seeing the improvement.
Fushigi - good job - I'm seeing the improvement.
# 34
sheldes a comic book rockstar. no doubt.
# 33
since when does Shelde colour. You paid someone to do this, admit it.
no no, i must admit it, shelde bro, you touched me with these panels of sweetness. touched me like no man has been touched before, you heartbreaker.
no no, i must admit it, shelde bro, you touched me with these panels of sweetness. touched me like no man has been touched before, you heartbreaker.
# 32
SHELDE' TOP NOTCH
# 31
holy shit...you fuckers made me blush....for real...thanks guys
# 30
shelde, you're my hero...
# 29
Baaahahahahahaaaaa!!! Thats great! xD Okay, yeah. You win, I loose. Good job.
and whats so bad about bein a cyborg anyway? xD Although, Fushigi is already with someone but.. yeah. xD Still, it was awesome.
and whats so bad about bein a cyborg anyway? xD Although, Fushigi is already with someone but.. yeah. xD Still, it was awesome.
# 28
shelde you are godly
# 27
panels/layout were tremendous as well...and don't get me wrong with my initial statement.....you're a giant killer.....this one just didn't tickle my eyeballs as much as others you've done
# 26
fushigi: strong move forward artistically...but it all seems to be in how you draw your character....Charlie is relatively simple compared to Fushigi....also the hand scribbled lettering in this was no bueno.....more effort should have been put into hand lettering or you should have done it in photoshop/illustrator....
shelde:the style is not my cup of tea.... but I would have to be blind not to appreciate the skill and quality....now storywise....A-fuckin-1!!!!!....the telephone bit was beauty....but a little too small.....
shelde:the style is not my cup of tea.... but I would have to be blind not to appreciate the skill and quality....now storywise....A-fuckin-1!!!!!....the telephone bit was beauty....but a little too small.....
# 25
Charlie you kicked ass i loved that whole date thing
# 24
Yea, t and a yes yes yes...i loved your comic! good work
# 23
GOD christ ALLMIGHTY! I love you both. Fush- you're gettin' better every day. Charlie - You're such a dick, and it works, and I love you for it. FUCK!
# 22
Oh, and um, to answer shelde's question on page7, not really XDD I did go blind for a while though.
I can more or less make out Fushigi swiping her arm at him, then firing off arm shots or summat, before morphing it FMA-style into some weird neon green (zomg!) metal lizard gun thingy. Yeah. X3
I can more or less make out Fushigi swiping her arm at him, then firing off arm shots or summat, before morphing it FMA-style into some weird neon green (zomg!) metal lizard gun thingy. Yeah. X3
# 21
Shelde, you have yourself a new fan. Dude I LOVE the way your comics looks so... conceptual like. The colors and everything. And your style! Wow. *whistles* Good storyline with your plot there, really enjoyed how you build up the reason for the fight... and then tore it DOWN! XD I really thought Charlie was all out for her, the poor girl. XD
Page5 was outta whack in a cool way. XD; How long did she hang around that phone?! And I think it's good that you didn't add the cliched cobwebs and all that time-passed-stuff.
Fushigi: Nice to see that this looks more complete black-and-white wise! You inked her hair awesomely. ^3^ I do wish the battle had been longer, or with more back story like the one you had with Dreaz, though I suppose another round of large number of pages like that would prolly kill you XD Two battles at once is quite a task.
Just a little nit pick on the last page of your battle though: Charlie's body kinda completely covers what Fushigi's doing. It's clear that she's kicking him, yeah, but it's kinda like... missing in the way that stuff looks missing when they get cropped off weird-like or if a censor bars in the way. ^^; If you have this sort of scenario in the future, I suggest re-angling the shot from maybe another viewpoint, or angle (worms, birds, dinosaur, whatever fits) to make the kick look more impressive. Still, fair fight, look forward to seeing your next battle. =D
Good luck you two, w00t!
Page5 was outta whack in a cool way. XD; How long did she hang around that phone?! And I think it's good that you didn't add the cliched cobwebs and all that time-passed-stuff.
Fushigi: Nice to see that this looks more complete black-and-white wise! You inked her hair awesomely. ^3^ I do wish the battle had been longer, or with more back story like the one you had with Dreaz, though I suppose another round of large number of pages like that would prolly kill you XD Two battles at once is quite a task.
Just a little nit pick on the last page of your battle though: Charlie's body kinda completely covers what Fushigi's doing. It's clear that she's kicking him, yeah, but it's kinda like... missing in the way that stuff looks missing when they get cropped off weird-like or if a censor bars in the way. ^^; If you have this sort of scenario in the future, I suggest re-angling the shot from maybe another viewpoint, or angle (worms, birds, dinosaur, whatever fits) to make the kick look more impressive. Still, fair fight, look forward to seeing your next battle. =D
Good luck you two, w00t!
# 20
YEAH SHELDEMIESTER! I am thoroughly impressed and awed by your six degrees of smokin' comic! I once dated a chick like post-call malfunction Fushigi...
Fushi- great art but definitely lacking in story and entertainment.
Fushi- great art but definitely lacking in story and entertainment.
# 19
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHA! OMG.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMG.
hahahaha. That's amazing.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMG.
hahahaha. That's amazing.
# 18
Shelde you're my bloody hero. Fushigi, it only gets better love. Rock on.
# 17
wow..............pretty pretty colors....evne though i normaly prefer black and white..... cant decide...x_X
# 16
i get the inkling all your effort was taken up by that HUGE drez fight you had fushi. Well done dude.
btw, Can anyone at al understand ANYTHING that happens on page 7??
btw, Can anyone at al understand ANYTHING that happens on page 7??
# 15
omg, Shelde, i can see why you kicked Zato's ass real bad back in the SDT.
# 14
lol shelde. 100% awesome.
# 13
OMFG SHELDE YOU ROCK. HAHAHAHA.
Fushigi: cool!! New fresh attempt, much better than your previous fights.
Fushigi: cool!! New fresh attempt, much better than your previous fights.
# 12
..... GAT dammit. xD;;
# 11
$10 says you forgot the gear strick hanging out of his back too!!
i forget ALL the time. but i dont really give a toss, just call it artistic interpretation.
i forget ALL the time. but i dont really give a toss, just call it artistic interpretation.
# 10
shit.. I didnt realize it until recently that I forgot the lil black mark on his face! Spare me the death! *hides under a rock*
# 9
lol xD now you know what I went through figuring them out before I made her
# 8
DRAWING METAL ARMS.....
SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKS.
SUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKS.
# 7
Hot robo chick vs. kid with sockpuppet? YEAH!
Good luck, guys.
Good luck, guys.
# 6
Charlie, you be nice now ya'hear? Fushie- do your best. I'll always be in your corner.
# 5
same to you sweetheart...just don't do the beatrix kiddo thing...
"YOU AQUICISE DEFEAT BEFORE you even...something or other"...
...
...good luck fushi.
"YOU AQUICISE DEFEAT BEFORE you even...something or other"...
...
...good luck fushi.
# 4
eeek o_o
Good luck to you, Shelde. Though I dont think you'll need it ^^;
Good luck to you, Shelde. Though I dont think you'll need it ^^;
# 3
Oh, exciting! *claps hands* The clash of insanely different styles.
Good luck both! <3
Good luck both! <3
# 2
Oh, exciting! *claps hands* The clash of insanely different styles.
Good luck both! <3
Good luck both! <3
# 1
oh snap shelde is picking up a pencil again
Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Jan 23rd, 2005
Votes Cast:
48
Page Views:
2022
Winner:
sheldon
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