GO! GO! KAMEN CHAMPION! *Wicked Guitar Riff* / Rickter & Gus vs. Kamen Champion

GO! GO! KAMEN CHAMPION! *Wicked Guitar Riff* — Rickter & Gus vs. Kamen Champion

This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.

Icon for Rickter & Gus48.8%
232 points
Page 1Page 2

Crit level: No preference
tags: 24 hour match, kamen champion, rickter and gus


by Cab

This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.

Icon for Kamen Champion51.2%
243 points
Page 1Page 2

Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged




Critiques & Comments
Please register or log in to comment


Fluffsamasprime
Artist
570 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 1 2020, 03:17 PM
Thanks for the comments! I did end up cutting out an entire sailormoon transformation page due to time constraints.
It's very much a non cannon comic, parodying what I remember of power rangers from when I was a kid.

Flytee
Community Manager
353 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 31 2020, 04:11 AM
I like that you both used these comics as a starting off point for larger stories, I think that's a smart use of a tight deadline. I also think art-wise both of these are really impressive for 24-hours. I take my hat off to you both.

Fluff- You had this great gag in the middle of your comic (the one about Kamens transformation taking too long) I love the concept, but I think you cut corners with the execution and it made the joke fall a bit flat.

- You choosing to draw just Kamens hand instead of a full-body transformation effected the clarity of what was happening. You also missed an opportunity to do a cheesy, classic transformation, which would have added to the humour.
- Also when Ricker asks "you done?" as he plays cards, it would've been great to actually see Kamen's reaction to such a thing!  

For a 24-hour battle this crit might come across as a bit nit-picky (it kinda is) but I actually think this is a good example of cutting the wrong things to save time. This mid-comic gag imo is actually the meat of this comic and really should have had your full attention.

TheCydork
Artist
606 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 30 2020, 09:22 PM
Woah it's really 24 hour battle time on the site eh?

Fluff - I'm not really sure what's happening here? Are they playing a DnD game and seeing it irl? Is it real, and if so why can Gus now manifest in a different form? I read Rivana's comment, and if you were going for "Kamen takes so long to transform that Rickter is playing a card game while waiting", that didn't come across for me, I think due to the fast pacing of the actual transformation. It could probably have been drawn out over more panels to show it was taking a long time. Still, good job for a day's battle! The expressions and background city texture were very effective.

Cab - I don't really think I can comment until I see the full story.

Rivana
Artist
368 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 30 2020, 06:43 AM
This is a battle that I didn't see happening from a mile away. Both comics are entertaining but neither of them offered an ending so I suppose there is a round 2 coming up? I hope so.

Fluffs - Love your humor as always. And what is this I see? Rickter can summon Gus's  now? This is new and exciting.  I do wish we got a glimpse on why Rickter wants to destroy the community center though! The poker game transpiring while Kamen Champion's transformation sequence was my favorite part.

Cab - I love how you picked up from the last  Armageddon on your side and how this tied in to Kamen's death in the last SDT. I thought Rickter also looked really cool in your style as well!  

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
570 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 25 2020, 01:16 PM
AH! Love it! Thank you for battling me Cab!!!

Fluffsamasprime
Artist
570 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 25 2020, 11:44 AM
My goal was 3 but I only got 2, still had a lot of fun on it!

Cab
Artist
153 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 24 2020, 10:20 PM
This is now gonna be a 2-parter from my half, I had more story to tell but ran out of time so I decided to break it up and hopefully get it done soon at a later date. I planned too much for a 24hr battle, but it was a pleasure fighting ya Fluff, you'll see more of your big guy in the next pages :-)

Comic Details -

 
Regular Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Nov 1st, 2020
Votes Cast: 13
Page Views: 1383
Winner: Cab
 

Add to Playlist -

 
 

Newest Comments -


Newest Characters -

 
Morrigan KingAugustus ThomasTheakonRod ChirpwoodHuskMizz BonzaiSpidella WidowsMyrmidonGhoulArcher Heart Mercury
 

Open Challenges -

 
No open challenges
Create a new challenge
 

Random Comic -


Most Wanted -

 
RantuBlack SwanCelifNagoreDairyuGhostTheakonChickenMannUltraRickter & GusHana RahalItamiMadd
 


Latest Topics -

 
All News, All The Time 
Last updated: Staff Bot - Apr 22, 2024, 11:47 PM
Revelarts images 
Last updated: Revelarts - Apr 16, 2024, 02:38 PM
Revelarts-ubator  
Last updated: Revelarts - Apr 15, 2024, 10:25 PM
Clown Jam 
Last updated: Radji - Feb 11, 2024, 04:51 AM
INTRODUCE YOURSELF 
Last updated: Maz - Nov 06, 2023, 04:13 PM
 

Latest Members -


Users online -

 
526 Guests, 0 Users


Most Online Today: 571.
Most Online Ever: 1,184 (Jan 13, 2020, 06:21 PM)

 

About Us

We exist to provide an environment for artists to learn and improve their sequential art skills competitively. Our community is designed to give critical feedback and encouragement to our many members the world over, at all skill levels.

Follow Us