Cab good work on making so many pages! I've talked about the 'meet the characters' pages before about being too wordy but it works much better here on page 5 rather than right at the beginning. "No time to argue, I have a debate to go to" is a good sneaky funny. I've vome down on the halftone before but it looks really good and neater in this comic. Smile is really scary it's great! Love the effort you put into the bgs, especially when Smile is fallling, that one looks tricky. It's amazing how much work you put into this, great job!

This was an impressive comic Cab, so many cameos, and characters getting involved in the plot help it feel more real and connected. I'm happy that you decided to continue your own canon, people doing what they want feel true to the spirit of Void.

Got glued from start to finish and I have nothing more that giving you big claps for it.

So much action! So many cameos! This is such an impressive comic, I'm happy that you were able to complete it! The twist at the end is a good hook, I'm interested in seeing where you go with this. I'm also happy to see you carving your own canon for Void, it shows that everyone can make their own universe and not feel confined by the canon that a majority is using (this isn't a dig at the people that do, seeing as I'm one), I find having many different settings to choose from can really help people who feel trapped.

The imagery of the city being in shambles, of the fights breaking out, they all feel really cinematic to me, like you'd see this sequence of events happening during a real-life emergency news report. The characters seem to all act appropriately to the threat, and I like how you put spotlight on so many characters, even as one time cameos. It really made the comic come alive, along with how detailed your backgrounds were.

I know you said you didn't want critiques, so feel free to ignore this part - I think the parts that are 'flashbacks,' or where you put visions of characters that aren't currently there, could use a different effect rather than the sorta transparent lines. You put so much effort into this comic and it really shows! This just feels a little weaker to me.

This was really nice work though, I'm happy to see you making more comics again!

I like that your story setting is a permutation of the different, previously and currently established canons of Void City. This comic should be used as a guideline for how people can approach their own personal takes on the Void setting if they choose to do something different but not drastically so, or to spark ideas for doing something very out there and whacky.

I like the introduction of the Void Keepers, an exciting gang of new bad dewds.

Also, also, even though I glimpsed it twice while you were streaming your work on the pages, the Sanguine cameo is still appreciated )))))))))

This is an interesting alternate timeline you have created, and it's always a treat seeing the entire Void unite to fight a common enemy! takes me back to 2017's Arma.
That ending was pretty exciting, especially the train fight and when everyone fought the fashion police. By the way, you're a madman for adding all these cameos! It was fun figuring out each one of them!
Good job with the world-building of this setting too! I'm curious about what else you have been planning for your AU.

[Sorry, I've only noticed now that you didn't want critiques so i edited them out of this comment]

I loved this! I really love how fleshed out and real you've made Void City feel. And that map is gorgeous! I'm a sucker for fictional maps. I can really feel and understand Miranda's love for Void City through this comic. The backgrounds are detailed and a delight to look at and I loved seeing all of the cameos!

This comic reads like a love letter to a certain era of Void, it's fine-tuned to your personal tastes so it won't be everyone's cup of tea, but your enthusiasm for this setting and these characters shine through- so that's a fair trade IMO.

I hope you continue to build on your personal Void City canon and have fun with it, I'm looking forward to seeing what you do next!

 

Holy shid Cab!!! You went all out on this! So many cameos!! So many pages!! also SPIDER BABY

The void keepers symbol resembles the evil twin of the freedom revolution hand i did back in my teenage years on Doodleordie under the username of Cookiefoe👀👀👀 I’ll post the link to the picture https://doodleordie.com/c/1xEijd9J7#17

You’re a champion Cab, I’m serious.

Holy molly, CAB !!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! ALL YOUR EFFORTS, TIME CONSUMING AND IMPROVEMENTS OMG!!! YOU’RE A BEAST!!!

The Phoenix Coalition and The Void Keepers need to be eradicated omg, they’re up to no good and division among the people!!!

Voidian citizens are strong! LET’S DO THIS! FOR THE BETTER FUTURE!💪💪💪

""If the mayor was your mom"

 only moths

Moths only

I'm expecting moths in this!