Don\'t go calling people out like that when you don\'t know what they\'re truly doing, Phil. Keep it minimal with the ridiculing.
He\'s never defaulted before if you noticed...

Fence, AWESOME lineart and tones. Wish you could\'ve finished, but at least you turned in something!

HAHAHAHAH fence that was a rather surprising cameo. your detective spandex is hot

the dog is adorable

HEY yea sorry it didn\'t get finished dudes! I\'ve been pretty busy with schoolwork andd since I don\'t have internet (minus when I sneak on at school) to constantly remind me it really got away from me, so yea my bad. I MAY go ahead and finish and submit as a BB? I thought this was gonna be kind\'ve a fun one so yea. and Spade, you poophead, YOU SHOULD DO THIS TOO. and thanks for the comments/crits thusfar!

fence: yours seemed rather imcomplete.. in that sometimes even incomplete battles can work SORTA but yurs ended on an awkward note..

BUT it looked good till it got there.. i dug the look of it. the dog was scary..and its not really a crit but a pref.. i hate hand written dialogue.. it just clutters things in my opinion.. but one good side is you dont cover up as much art if youve got it laid out into the art.. was a decent start.. lets see the finish tho.

Fun read Fence. Just give us more next time!!!
And Spade? Prepare for incessant wisecrackin\' on your mama.

-J

Fence- I really like your style and the story was getting good too. I agree with Zsa..where is the rest of it? D:

really nice toning as well :3

DefSpade: Spend more time on your comics and less time goofing off in the DA chat room and playing as pretend koufuyo. If you\'re not gonna give us a finished comic or not gonna give us anything at all, then don\'t bother battling on void. Some people actually do put out the effort to draw your character ya know. If you plan on doing other things that isn\'t void related I highly suggest doing so.




Fence: Not bad in the least, I gotta ask why this comic seems so unfinished in the end. Still a good story and great art from you nonetheless. Sorry spade crapped out on ya.

FANECE, these pages looked really nice! The background line art on pages 2 and 3 seemed a little weak, though. I kind of wish we could see more background, too. But still, your pacing and dialogue is always lively and fun; could I have more Girl and Dog please!

Fence ; ;
Looking top notch stuff. i don\'t really know what else to say, other than WHERE IS THE REST OF IT ;;
Amzing.

Spade: You should go less to the chat, you slacker >:I

ZOMG!!!!!

yes please

Whoa! Ready\'n kickin

looking forward to this

Snow hoes.

good luck you kids

WOH NOES

WUH OH