Ah, sucks to see life got in the way for most contestants Hope you’re all doing okay.
MrPr - I found this kind of hard to follow as the flow was a bit clunky. I also don’t understand Mozzie’s design so a lot of the panels she was in, I spent too much time wondering what part of her face I was actually looking at. I like how you used traits from your opponents to inform the quest though, like Crestwood’s blood magic!
Pita - Oh wow I love these interpretations! It was really clever to make Mozzie and actual cheese maker, and I loveee kobold Kujo. Excellent littol creature vibes. I also enjoyed the dialogue, like Lu’s cheeky comment and Crestwood talking about the cheese knife.
Dungeon Master of Disaster, Round 1 / Cyrus Crestwood vs. Joey vs. Mozzie vs. Kujo
Critiques & Comments
# 8
Posted:
Jun 9 2021, 01:28 AM
# 7
Posted:
Jun 5 2021, 10:50 AM
Bummer that life gets in the way of things, but still awesome job Pita and MrPr! Both really entertaining comics to read!
# 6
Posted:
Jun 4 2021, 02:15 AM
Sorry I have 0 energy for a big beefy crit. I just wanted to quickly drop in and say well done.
Both of these comics had enjoyably chaotic energies & very much felt like solid, complete stories. The art was nice and clean & I particularly loved how you both interrupted one another's characters.
Pita the backgrounds look great, the extra push showed.
PR I liked how you shaded this, the characters really popped and the little flourishes of lighting and colour changes were nice.
Both of these comics had enjoyably chaotic energies & very much felt like solid, complete stories. The art was nice and clean & I particularly loved how you both interrupted one another's characters.
Pita the backgrounds look great, the extra push showed.
PR I liked how you shaded this, the characters really popped and the little flourishes of lighting and colour changes were nice.
# 5
Posted:
Jun 3 2021, 02:59 PM
MrPr- I like the cameos in this and your husky version of Kujo. It's a cool idea for them to be rescuing demon Luxuria. I didnt realize until reading thru the second time that dark formless Kujo monster killed the last guy on the stairs. I thought he was up to something but I hadnt noticed the scary face the first time, maybe that could have been clearer, but this was a good short quest. Mozz is so adorable, I hope you do more comics with her.
Pita- Your interpretation of Mozz here is so great, the milkmaid direction was a nice idea. When she uses her bard magic and it's yodeling i thought that was genius-- and we see the effects of the magic right away because they can find the wagon. I forgot that your character was kujo because I got very vested in mozz's story here..
the backgrounds and motion look great and the story flows well into the second round.. im excited to see more from this naughty sneaker
Pita- Your interpretation of Mozz here is so great, the milkmaid direction was a nice idea. When she uses her bard magic and it's yodeling i thought that was genius-- and we see the effects of the magic right away because they can find the wagon. I forgot that your character was kujo because I got very vested in mozz's story here..
the backgrounds and motion look great and the story flows well into the second round.. im excited to see more from this naughty sneaker
# 4
Posted:
Jun 2 2021, 03:00 PM
I uploaded something, all right.
Quote from: Pita
OOP. YEP. Page 6 is glitched from Sai. Sorry about that.
Whether or not that effects your judgement, if you want to see the comic with the page as intended, here it is!
# 3
Posted:
Jun 1 2021, 09:35 PM
I uploaded something, all right.
# 2
Posted:
May 18 2021, 07:48 AM
This is a good old bag of misfit adventurers and I love it!
# 1
Posted:
May 18 2021, 06:24 AM
Hope no secret evil plans are happening here!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Jun 9th, 2021
Votes Cast:
15
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1569
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